Hunt you down

[bloodyrose2442]

Title: Hunt you down
Pairing: Myungsoo/Sungyeol 
Rating: PG-13
Lenght: One-shot, 2, 290 words 
Summary: Would you like to hear the story of the boy with a tainted smile and the smile of a tainted boy?
A/N: Beta-ed by the amazing  kiccy and dedicated to my dear unnie evaa_x3

Comments

[sunlit]

i kid you not and this is legit me inside the moment i finished this fic ;_______________;



i-i creeped around your comments and i know how much you appreciate people quoting their favourite parts of your fic, but in all honesty, if i were to do that, i'd literally be quoting this entire story, really. ;;;;;; i loved it that much ♥ this, i-in every sense of the word possible, is beautiful and wonderful and amazing and flawless and everything in between the cracks! ;~~~~; i loved - loved is an understatement, really ;;;;;; - every single aspect of the fic, the characterization, plot, pace... everything ♥

but if anything, i admire, worship, like, love, you name it - the way you told the story. you didn't tell us what happened through feelings or emotions or anything like that, you told the entire story merely through descriptives and imagery and oh god, it's just so beautiful *__________* ♥ every scene is so vivid and it's like i see everything unfolding before my eyes, but somehow, even through only descriptions, the emotions fall through as well, and it's absolutely lovely ;uuuuuuuu; ♥♥♥

tbh i really think you deserve a better comment than this incoherent ramble of sorts, but i'm just really, really blown away right now and-- cries i just really don't know anymore ;~~~~~; adding this to my mems, this is just so wonderfully written, thank you so much for sharing this with us! ;;;;;; ♥

[bloodyrose2442]

Oh my god unnie- you just.... *hugs you and pats your back*

You have no idea just how happy I am that you think like that and what's with all the undeserving flattery you have fit in this comment!?

I have noticed that really not a lot of people use that way of letting emotions through and I just- I dunno that's the way my brain works I guess? Somehow I have always been a descriptive person because my dialog skills sucks and my fluff-o-meter seems to suck too (you have no idea just how hard it is for me to write something fluffy~)

This is like such an honor for me- somebody actually memming my story and not to mention it's you and all and yeah.... if you notice my replies then you have read this already but there's no harm in repeating it- I'm lame haha~

Just thank you so, so much for reading and for this wonderful comment I am totally unworthy of ♥~ *throws cookies and hearts and myungyeol pics towards you*

[sunlit]

/is a mess and just falls into your arms and just clings ;;;;;;;;;

sobs hasjdhkjsahdjhsadakshdkjashd how is this undeserving flattery at all, my wonderful dongsaeng ;~~~~~~~; you deserve every single bit of the praise i have in that comment and so much more that i can't put in because my language is not flowery and rainbows and descriptive like yours! ;a;

indeed, it's rare to express an entire fic through descriptives, and i think not a lot of people try it because it's hard and it really could make or break a fic - it could turn it into a flawless piece, and also make it so terribly confusing no one understands it. but safe to say, you absolutely nailed this technique and it makes for a wonderful read ♥ tbqh, my dialogue skills are terrible as well; i only use minimal dialogues in my fics because i can't use them without sounding like a noob ;;;;;;; and don't get me started on my inability to write fluff, it haunts me even to this day ;a; /stares at that woogyu project

s-sobs i'm nothing special, you know ;uuuuu; and you are not lame okay ♥ /squishes THIS STORY IS WORTH MEMMING SO YOUR ARGUMENT IS INVALID

/happily noms cookies and keeps hearts and stares unhealthily at myungyeol