Comments | bloodyroose: [FanFic] Beyond the Veil (Chapter 6)

bloodyroose

[FanFic] Beyond the Veil (Chapter 6)

Aug 29, 2010 23:34

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sora_kawaii August 29 2010, 20:57:39 UTC

i found myself refreshing my lj acount over and over again!!! just for this fic!!! im so stress now, i didnt want to star reading so it wont end T.T sooooo short but so hearthbreaking, yh dont do this to jj pleaseeee

bloodyroose August 30 2010, 21:14:14 UTC

lol glad to hear^^
sorry to make you stressed
here is the rest
hope you would like it~

fukada_kyoko78 August 29 2010, 21:04:07 UTC

thanks for the story..
it makes my heart stop when susu looking at young chunnie >_<
can't wait for the next but take ur time :D

bloodyroose August 30 2010, 21:14:41 UTC

thx for reading
here is the next part
hope you like it

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bloodyroose August 30 2010, 21:14:56 UTC

yup they are
hope you like the chap

thank you.................. thucdsp August 29 2010, 21:11:28 UTC

Is it me ,who asking too much or..I read it so fast or.....,I think this chapter is tooooo short ,and I have to wait till the next chapter is coming out...?*_*,*_*.:(
But.......... I 'm still love you and your story,,please keep writting .....

Re: thank you.................. sora_kawaii August 29 2010, 21:14:20 UTC

i fell the same!!! ahhhhhhhhh going crazy

Re: thank you.................. thucdsp August 29 2010, 21:33:47 UTC

and then ,here we come ,we are those people gonna be crazy until the next chapter...Give me 5,...^O^......

Re: thank you.................. bloodyroose August 30 2010, 21:16:25 UTC

lol the chapters are always the same length
sometimes longer but never too short
at least four pages in microsoft word
in font size 12
but im glad you like the story so
hope you will like the new chap too~
thx for reading

thucdsp August 29 2010, 21:25:37 UTC

I'm glad to see Yunho tolds Jae stop mention again about the broke up the engagement ,somewhere in his heart still have Jae and know about Jae's love .Please don't break Jae's heart any more ,I don't want to see him cry so hard like that ,Yunho must do somethimg for him ,at least,show him that Yunho love him too,and worry about him too.Su cried because he thought Chun was dead ,but Jae -he's crying just because he thinks his lover steps by steps leaving him ,choosing the other in front of him,It 's so hard to live ,and to handle it.It hurts ,a lots,don't you see it....?

bloodyroose August 30 2010, 21:17:37 UTC

yup yun had feelings for jae for sure
i wont i promise
now yun knows su is his brother in law
they cant be together
jae will make yun pay soon
you will see
hope you like the chap