Evening (Anti-Climax), xhopelesley's Valentine Card, Writing.

Feb 04, 2006 02:40

Ik liep erheen, had dit keer geen moeite om het te vinden en zag tot mijn frustratie 'heden avond in verband met besloten feest alleen open voor genodigden' staan. En ik dan, liefje? Ik heb vandaag speciaal voor jullie zelfs make-up gebruikt. Ik ben vroeger dan nodig weggegaan van mijn vrienden en had mijn hoop gevestigd op het bevestigen van mijn eigen kracht.

Maar het was dus gesloten, dus ik liep weer terug naar het station en nam de bus naar huis. Anti-climax? Laat me niet lachen.

At home I found Amaree xhopelesley's card which according to the date it was mailed reached me rather fast. Did you send it through Priority mail?

My head's inside the story I have to finish tonight. txilar and floatingoranges have been/are being helpful with the one line I've been working on these last two-and-a-bit hours. I just might be too critical. Just might.

Not reading all my e-mailed LJ comments since I'm trying to concentrate.

Am off to write the rest. I'm afraid I'll have to post it when I get up later today (probably somewhere in the afternoon) instead of tonight, txilar, since I still haven't finished.

Can't seem to get the tone I've had all through the beginning of the story right.

Jess floatingoranges e-mailed me two stories that I'm going to write a review for. That reminds me of the Golden Rules I found a while ago - I have it printed out with a few notes written next to it, must finish & type out.

writing, review, sjohn's café

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