week 3 comment
here's my comment on drama_queen_01's entry, which is her heritage poem.
hey, i really like this poem. just seems to keep rolling and i love the recurring motif of the blue eyes. fantastic. and the line
artistic love,dramatic eye
and sounds of the opera.
its really good. i have but one criticism and that is where you use 'kind' to start off lines 2 and 3 in the first stanza, but aside fromt that, its great!
keep it up.
Andrew
hey, i really like this poem. just seems to keep rolling and i love the recurring motif of the blue eyes. fantastic. and the line
artistic love,dramatic eye
and sounds of the opera.
its really good. i have but one criticism and that is where you use 'kind' to start off lines 2 and 3 in the first stanza, but aside fromt that, its great!
keep it up.
Andrew