Fuckin' facepalm.
... I'm not even 5,000 words into my nano yet. And the characters are already throwing themselves at each other.
Damien and Toshiya, you whores!
Although it really is too early ... it's also entirely in character for these two. Even after they develop a relationship (which will not happen till the end, though it looks like they will probably tease each other through the whole thing) they are very open with sex, and open to multiple partners.
Oi. *facepalm*
(At the very least, *I* think the pacing works. That's something.)
Edit: Just remembered I'm technically starting at chapter two, since chapter one was written prior to nano. So it's not quite as bad ....
Damien and Toshiya, you whores!
Although it really is too early ... it's also entirely in character for these two. Even after they develop a relationship (which will not happen till the end, though it looks like they will probably tease each other through the whole thing) they are very open with sex, and open to multiple partners.
Oi. *facepalm*
(At the very least, *I* think the pacing works. That's something.)
Edit: Just remembered I'm technically starting at chapter two, since chapter one was written prior to nano. So it's not quite as bad ....