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Fic: When I Think About Cheating

Aug 12, 2008 01:59

TITLE : When I Think About Cheating
AUTHOR: BohoFemm
FANDOM: Buffy the Vampire Slayer
PAIRING: Spike/Xander
GENRE : Slash
TABLE: Do-it-yourself
PROMPT: Forsaking All Others
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 719
SUMMARY: Traveling is hard, especially when you're separated from the one you love.
WARNINGS: None.
NOTES: X-Posted to 10_Hurt_Comfort. This is something new I'm trying, ( Read more... )

Comments 12

devo79 August 12 2008, 10:18:43 UTC

I really like this one.

Let's hope Billy doesn't get eaten :)

bohofemm August 12 2008, 10:39:06 UTC

I was REALLY nervous about this fic since I've never written in 3rd person before. I just hope Xan's character came through. (Did it?)
I am SO glad you liked it though!

devo79 August 13 2008, 14:02:05 UTC

Xander's character did come through just fine. He sounded like he should...like a grown up :)

mia_dcwut_09 August 12 2008, 14:53:22 UTC

aww this is so sweet so cute loved it

bohofemm August 12 2008, 22:16:26 UTC

Glad you liked it.

melanie2525 August 12 2008, 21:08:29 UTC

I think you did a great job. What Xander is feeling comes right across.

bohofemm August 13 2008, 06:03:57 UTC

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

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bohofemm August 13 2008, 06:04:15 UTC

I loved the subtle way it dropped off, leaving no more. Thanks for reading!

darthsindel1981 August 13 2008, 00:44:11 UTC

very good

bohofemm August 13 2008, 06:04:23 UTC

Thanks. :)