And When You Say Jump, I Do The Twist (Moonlighting, Maddie/David)

[blithers]

Title: And When You Say Jump, I Do The Twist
Author: blithers
Show: Moonlighting
Pairing/Character: Maddie/David
Rating: PG
Spoilers: none
Word Count: 1838
Disclaimer: Not mine, not mine, not mine.
Also Posted At: AO3
Author's Note: Thank you to 51stcenturyfox for the beta!
Summary: Five times David shows up at Maddie's place, and one time she

Comments

[gypsygem81]

ooooh, I loved these. You have the banter so spot on. Great job - thanks for posting!

[blithers]

Thank you! The banter is my favorite part. <3

[rise_your_dead]

OMG This is AMAZING! You get the voices just right for them - fun banter. Dave's voice is, in particular, perfect; and you can see the slow development of their relationship. Really beautifully done!

[blithers]

Wow, thank you! That really means a lot to me - I'm so glad you liked it. I've been writing this story slowly for a while now, so I'm awfully happy that you thought it pulled together in the end. :)

[rise_your_dead]

You're quite welcome! You definitely did, I could totally hear their voices!

[kimbari]

Well done! Just like watching an episode... well, an episode of vignettes. I'm glad I stopped for this one, and yeah, your David was perfect. Not to say your Maddie wasn't. :)

[blithers]

David is such a fun character to write for - he has such a distinctive voice, doesn't he? Thank you for commenting - it makes my day to know there are still Moonlighting fans out there!

[51stcenturyfox]

YAY it's up! It's so fantastic! <3!

Your voices are so spot on. I love David sliding his finger over her picture. *sigh sigh sigh*

[blithers]

YAH!

*does a happy David dance*

You rock!

Here via 51stcenturyfox

[mad_jaks]

Has SO much love. *happy sigh* Thanks for sharing.

Re: Here via 51stcenturyfox

[blithers]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)