Four Times John Did, and One Time He Didn't

[blissfire]

Title: Four Times John Did, and One Time He Didn't
Author: Blissfire
Rating: R
Pairing: Rodney/John, John/OFC
Summary: John cheats, and then he doesn't.
Warnings: Angst, het.
Set after The Return. Woe, I own nothing.

Comments

[downloadable08]

Oh, ouch. As much as we all make the tramp!John jokes, I can actually see him as the type who wouldn't know what to do with love when he got it. Thanks for sharing!

[blissfire]

That's a lovely way to put it, him not knowing what to do with love - I didn't want to make John a bastard, just kind of lost, so I'm happy if that came through. Thank you!

[shoequeeny]

Oh, ouch. I really enjoyed this- for some reason I really like Cheating!John even though I can never, ever read Rodney cheating on John. It's one of those weird things I have in this fandom. This was really great though especially the line about the third time which, just, OUCH.

[blissfire]

I totally get those weird things. For me, Rodney has a whole other set of rules separate from any of the other characters. I know it's unfair, but I just can't help it. And that's my favourite line, too. =) Thanks!

[celticwelsh]

For some reason I was sure it was going to have a happy ending, but I think this is far better than a happy ending could have been.

[blissfire]

Thank you! I much prefer a happy ending, but it just didn't work out that way, poor boys.

[porntestpilot]

I could really feel this, and I actually kind of like the betrayal ones.
Thanks!

[blissfire]

Strangely, I can't read betrayal fics, but apparently I have no problem writing them. Thanks for commenting!

[emrinalexander]

OUCH! But in a very good way - I really liked this, even though it hurts. I think the only way I would have liked this better would've been to actually read Rodney packing it in and walking away from John *G*. I guess I'm just vengeful, but I found myself imagining him just walking out mentally and physically without really saying anything other than "So long, John."

[blissfire]

I imagine it in pretty much the same way, with Rodney just having given up and walking out on John without much fanfare. It warms my own vengeful heart to imagine Rodney moving on, and John not. Heh. Thanks for commenting!