[Fan Fic] Fragments - Chapter 16

[blinkbling24]

Title: Fragments
Author: blinkbling24
Pairing: Akame, Kokame
Genre: Angst, Romance, Smut
Rating: NC-17 (As there will be smut in subsequent chapters)
Disclaimer: I obviously don’t own them, because if I did, this fic would be in video instead of just words.
Warning: Fic is unbeta-ed, so please excuse the grammer/spelling mistakes, if any.
Summary:

Comments

[fanofken]

*big sign* I'm so sorry but I skipped all the part KoKame. I simply cant take it, cant read it. It's just so wrong with me. When Jin came into the hotel room with "he got the answer this afternoon", I expected that Jin will refused Kame. But he lost... It made my heart ache. very much.

But I like the way you write. I'm waiting for the next update... Still wondering how you can solve this triangle ^^

[imangelofmusic]

this was sooo... not sweet x) would have been cool to have Jin having massive cry-kick-scream tantrum in the end but this is good too ^^

[mailinh6589]

I hope Kame will want Jin more than that soon :(

[hikayuto]

Nooooo Jin, you shouldn't agree with Kazu-chan.

Poor Jin. I hate Kokame smut >__> *sorry Kokame's fans - bows deeply*
In my mind there's always Jin when he was young, that handsome and baka boy. I can't stand Jin suffering, sad or disappointed.
Kame almost choked on tears at the disappointment and sadness in Jin’s eyes. So you should not cause Jin more pain Kazu-chan ;____;

I love this fic. Hope you will update fast ;___;

[bellemainec]

*cuddles Jin* *glares at Kame* *pats Koki on shoulder* *cuddles JIn some more*
A fabulous chapter, which shows just how much of a mess Kame is getting himself into, how much Jin is hurting at the moment (and how much he regrets and how much he is willing to hurt himself just to get as little as Kame will give him), and how Koki is happy, oblivious and presumably heading for heartache if Kame keeps up his intentions.

Loved the juxtaposition of Gokusen Akame with later Akame.......showed how Kame has matured and developed and how Jin's thought and actions helped get them where they are by the end of this story.

The scene with Kame and Koki was hot, but it made me feel terrible because Koki *does not know*. Likewise the Kame and Jin scene was gorgeous and hot....but it made me want to cry because Kame was going to shatter Jin's heart. *glares at Kame again* Yes there needs to be a solution to their triangle but there is going to be so much hurt in that....*wibble*

Beautifully written chapter as always *cuddles Jin some more*