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Sep 24, 2009 22:45


Peering from somewhere amidst nature
Caked in leaves and beginning
to ferment, or perhaps just
produce a velvet blanket of moss

Meant to be a safe place
Not quite a haven, just a little cove
where shingles won't crack under
thoughts that won't shut off

Some switches cling despite tugs
Bits of wire clutch like shards to
flesh trying to fade into
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poetry, attempt at actual writing

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haileyhenz January 3 2010, 05:05:43 UTC
I really like this. I love the line "where shingles won't crack under thoughts that won't shut off."

I'm a creative writer myself, although poetry is not my thing. I like to write it to myself as just a way to vent, but it's never very good :(

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blindmoonrise January 4 2010, 00:09:27 UTC
Thank you! Wow, I haven't looked at this poem in a long time; it isn't one I've ever tried to publish. Just something I wrote on a whim.

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