veeery eeenntrestingtinkblinkSeptember 3 2005, 23:29:55 UTC
Wow... was this ever weird!!! I'm not sure I quite got the full meaning of this story - I think I got a bit lost near the middle where you're describing William's first encounter with the creation?monster?experiment? in his bathroom.
The 'ending' was superb. It seemed like you were getting into the swing of things, the plot was leading the reader through sinuous pathways, the atmosphere was becoming loaded... and the door was LOCKED?! from the inside?!
ARRRRGGHGHHHH! I wanna know what happens next... I was so into the story...
Well done! Pray, write again. I shall see what I can contribute additionally.
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The 'ending' was superb. It seemed like you were getting into the swing of things, the plot was leading the reader through sinuous pathways, the atmosphere was becoming loaded... and the door was LOCKED?! from the inside?!
ARRRRGGHGHHHH! I wanna know what happens next... I was so into the story...
Well done! Pray, write again. I shall see what I can contribute additionally.
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