Note: The OCs I am going to cover next are from an OC donation pile. The profile provided IS the sample and complete sample. For those who don't know what an OC donation pile is, that is where you ask people to donate OCs for your fanfic instead of coming up with your own. On fanfiction.net, that is technically against the rules. I am going to add a few notes to each one.
Title: Fourteenth Squad
Rating: Soifon
Name:Shay Tsukino
Gender:Female
Age: Looks 14 but is really 114
Seat:Doesn't matter
Specialty:Shunpo
Personality: She's loud and bossy. She doesn't like to litsen to others very much and when given advice she ignores it most of the time and does things her own was and somehow it ends pretty well. She doesn't care about what other people think and does whatever she wants most of the time. She's very cunning, sneaky and sly. She's hot-tempered and spunky. Despite all this she takes what she does very seriously and will not hesitate to kill anyone who stands in her way. She hates losing and always pushes herself to do better then anyone in anything. She likes to tease people but what most people (besides her close friends and captain) don't know is that when she teases you she likes you or respects you.
Appearance:She has long midnight blue hair in two high pigtails with bangs that stops alittle bit above her eyes and two longer pieces of hair on both sides of her face that goes a little bit past her chin. She has pale skin and golden eyes that look like cat eyes and is very petite. She has a hour glass body with small boobs. She's only about 4'3
Likes:Music. Getting her way. Doing things her own way. Sneaking up on people. Hanging out with Rukia, Momo and Rangiku. Drinking when she's not aloud to. Teasing poeple (mostly captains and lieutenants). Winning. Getting out of doing her work by doing puppy dog eyes or fake crying. Teasing Byakuya, Toshiro, Soifon, Renji and Hisagi. The rain. Dancing. Drawing. Being in high places. Swimming
Dislikes:Thunder and lightning. Not getting her way. Being told what to do. Getting advice. Being underestimated. When one of the captains or lieutenants treat her like a kid. When anyone from her divion treats her like a kid.Aizen, Tosen and Gin
History:Her dad used to beat her and her mom till one day he beated them to death. When she was sent to the soul society, she lived with a few other kids who didn't have any family there. One day when she was looking for food she found a small tiger cub who was hurt so she took it home with her and cared for it till it was better and they formed a bond with it. When she went to the academy some people feared her becouse Tora(the tiger) always fallowed her around everywhere she went
Zanpaktou: Kage neko(shadow cat). When it's sealed it's a katana with a black blade and a silver hilt and when it's in it's shikai it turns into a black glove with long silver claws that has poison at the tips that is very deadly if you get touched by it
Theme song: She has a few, Sharada by Skye Sweetname, Just the way I am by Skye Sweetnam and Angel to you but Devil to me by Click Five
Any Extra information: She has a bond with most cats and is always seen with Tora. She has three other cats a black one named Midnight, A white one named Snowflake and A grey one named Ash. She also has a small crush on Toshiro, Hisagi, Renji and one of the vizards Kensei. Also she has cat like fangs as her canine teath(the pointed teath on the top part of your mouth)
Notes: An attempt to put in a lot of flaws into the character so that she isn't a Mary Sue only to have... a Mary Sue in the long run, one we call the anti-sue. Some could take this profile and make her not-a-sue, but not everyone.