242: Tale of the Rose Maiden ~ Ducky1
Title: Tale of the Rose Maiden
Name: “ The only things that I own are Keisotsu Yojin, Shiba Yoshun and her zanpakuto (Benigetsu Ketsubara) and this individual story.”
Suethor: Ducky1
Pairings: Yoshun/Yojin
Stats: 3,916 words, 1 review, 1 favorite, 2 follows
Rating: Kenpachi
Appearance: She's not described.
Background: She's gripping about of a piece of pie when she is also getting ready to head to the academy. It skips to her having joined a squad under Captain Urahara who wasn't a captain back then, but then this bit of info wasn't known when the fanfic was written. She's bad at fighting and gets hurts. Then she's waking up and having to deal with her husband and she meets up with Byaukuya, who forces her into a dual for some random reason. He tells her she'll never make the rank of captain and then she is sparring with Yourichi.
Sue Qualifications: She has twin zanpaktuos. There is also no point to this character other then being a self insert.
Annoying Attributes: There happens to be a lot of teenage angst about not getting the last piece of pie. On the positive side of things, Isshin seems to be related to the Shiba's in this fanfic. However, this means that there are five kids instead of just three. It also reads like an RPG.
Sample:
It was a peaceful night in Soul Society. Winter was gone and spring had finally come, bringing with it warm air and plenty of sunlight. The green grass had returned and even a few fireflies would appear during the course of the evening. In the mind of a Shiba, West Rukongai had to be the most peaceful place in all of Soul Society. This peace was unexpectedly shattered by a scream.
"Ah! Kuukaku that isn't fair!" squealed a teenaged Shiba Yoshun.
"Of course it's fair, big sisters always get the last piece of pie," Kuukaku retorted, taking a big bite out of the very last piece of pie that Yoshun had her blue-green eyes set on ever since she finished her first.
"You're only five minutes older than me Kuukaku!"
Kuukaku responded by sticking out her tongue and devouring the rest of the pie. Yoshun glared at her older sister, arms crossed over her chest, as if to try and intimidate Kuukaku, who simply smiled in blatant triumph that she had once again had the last of the dessert. Yoshun growled and was prepared to lunge at her sister when a hand settled on her orange colored hair.