237: All What We Do For Love ~ Kaijun-Ichichan-4-Ever
I'm going to give a heads up that the next pairing week is going to be for Ichigo/Rukia. A long time ago some people theorized that Ichigo was the reincarnation of Kaien but it was eventually proved to be false. While I did find a few of those, I also found this.
Title: All What We Do For Love
Name: Kurosaki Ichigo
Suethor: Kaijun-Ichichan-4-Ever
Pairings: Ichigo/Renji-Grimmjow-Kaien (now, past, one-sided)
Stats: 8 chapters, 12,813 words, 1 reviews, 4 favorites, 1 follow; average: 1,500 words and less then one on everything else.
Rating: Soifon
Appearance: Ichigo is a girl in this fanfic.
Background: No explanation as to why though. The first chapter is about female Ichigo getting raped. Chapter two sees Ichigo in the kitchen with her eight year old daughter named Masaki and a seven year old named Kon. Ichigo throws Kon's pet spider outside. Ichigo is with Renji and Renji is taking their son to pick out his birthday. Present. Her brother Kaien comes to visit. Masaki isn't well, and then a murder of a woman is announced on the news, some character names Kuchiki Miyako is dead. Kaien is for some reason is happy. This is what I was able to get out of this poorly written fanfic.
Sue Qualifications: Kaien and Ichigo are brother and sister. Kaien and Ichigo get drunk and Ichigo gets a hand over Miyako is suddenly Byakuya's sister. There are other changes too.
Annoying Attributes: The “W-A-R-N-I-N-G-S” list “Drama, Angst, Incest, Rape, Child abuse, Pregnant & Death”. We then have this in the author's note. “If you have read the W-A-R-N-I-N-G-S , and you don't like Yaoi , Yuri , Genderbender or something else , then please don't read the fanfic and don't leave a review on it Thank you !” First, you don't have to warn about drama and angst. Third, I wish “warnings” was not written that way. Third, the problems with the fanfic has nothing to do with the warnings. There is a problem with paragraph formatting and then there is the fact these are the canon characters in name only. They are horribly OoC.
Not:e: The Suethor's first language is not English, so things like using the word “pregnant” instead of “pregnancy” is expected. However, I have a piece of advice for people looking for a possibly Beta. Write more main stream stuff, you're more likely to find a Beta and if you form a trust bond they may read stuff they normally wouldn't read.
Sample: (Chapter 2: When the Visit Came)
" Mommy ! Kon is bullying me ! " Shouted Ichigo 's 8 year old daughter Masaki, she ran to her mother crying . Kon came in the kitchen running with a spider in his hand, Ichigo made a quick move and took the spider and threw it outside . " Mommy I wanted to keep it ! " Nagged her 7-year-old son . " Spiders are not pets ." She said ." But ... Hisagi-Sensei 's older brother has a lot of them ." He said while he stuck a finger in his nose, Ichigo rolled her eyes and took his finger out his nose . " Do not put your fingers in your nose, that will give you big nose holes ." She said and wiped the snot from Kon 's finger, and let him wash his hands ." And Hisagi - Sensei 's brother may keep a spider as pet, but it does not mean you can plus he is an adult ." Ichigo said strict as she continued working on the food, Kon pursed mad his lips together . Masaki laughed softly on the other side of her mother, Kon stuck his tongue out and Masaki stuck her tongue out to . " Be careful that your tongue 's don 't falls in the food . " Ichigo said as she put the vegetables in the pot . " Yes mom . " Kaon and Masaki said the same time, the children suddenly heard the door open . And saw their father coming in ." Hello everyone ." He greeted the children as they ran to their father, and jumped on him Renji laughed ." Well what did I miss ?"
" Mommy threw my pet out ! " Said Kon
" Just because Mommy says that spiders are not pets ! " Masaki defended her mother .
" Daddy I want a spider as pet ." Kon said