315: Soccer Cinderella - Cici2116
Here is day four of Cinderella Week.
Title: Soccer Cinderella
Name: Karin, Yuzu, Toshiro, Orihime, Ichigo
Suethor: Cici2116
Pairings: Karin/Toshiro/Yuzu
Stats: 15 chapters, 19,287 words, 54 favorites, 66 follows; average, 1,300 words, 2 favorites, 2 follows
Rating:: Toshiro
Appearance: I hope like canon, there is barily any description in this fanfic and where there is it tends to not be linked with specific characters.
Background: Yuzu and Orihime are now Karin's step-sisters. Karin is the valedictorian in her class. There is lots of random slice of life in this fanfic.
Sue Qualifications: Replace the canon character names and you've got original fiction. Need I say more.
Annoying Attributes: My favorite pairing for Toshiro is with Karin. However, I really dislike this fanfic a lot because of what the Suethor's done to Yuzu. They're twin sisters for crying out loud and .
Sample: (Chapter 1)
My name is Karin Kurosaki and my life is basically a living hell. No really! I have to care for my two evil stepsisters. What are there names you might ask? Well that's easy those two evil witches are named Yuzu and Orihime, and I have to everything they say. Why? You may ask. Well it's a long story, my dad married my evil stepmom, then left me to deal with them. I missed both of parents more than anything in the entire world, my mom had died when I was young of cancer, and my dad died recently of a car crash. Now since they left me I have to serve my step-sisters as there slave basically. Why? It's simple really, if my step-mom is not happy, then no money for college. Even though I'm hoping that I get a full scholarship for soccer, because I love soccer more than anything right now! Anyways on to the story,
"KARIN!" I heard my stepmother through the intercom, yes I have an intercom in my room because I need to be alerted for every little thing they need. I ran to get dressed in my usual clothing, nothing special, just a soccer t-shirt and some jeans. Then, I ran to see what the hell, my evil stepmother needed.
"Yes?" I asked her trying to pretend I wasn't annoyed and I was trying to act as politely as a girl like me could.
"I need you to wake up the girls to get ready for school." She said.
"Fine." I said, then started my daily routine for the whole school week. I turned on the TV, then started to wake up the little brats, though they are the same age as me. "Wake up! It's time for school!" I told Orihime. She then did something unusual, she jumped out of bed excitedly, I had no idea why either. So then I went to wake up Yuzu, "Hey wake up Yuzu! It's a school day!" I told her.
Then she did something unusual, she jumped out of bed and ran to get ready. I was so curious to figure out why so I asked, "Yuzu, why are you so excited? It's just school."
"O Karin you fool, that's where you are wrong! She said ecstatically. I just looked at her so confused as she continued. "Today is the day!"
"What day?" I was really confused now.
"Today is the day that I make Toshiro Hitsugaya mine." I laughed to myself, because I had totally forgot about the whole event, Toshiro Hitsugaya one of the youngest and greatest soccer players on Japan's National Team. Yuzu was obsessed with him, she never just watched the game like I did. I loved watching him play, not because he was good looking or anything like that, not that he wasn't, but that's besides the point. The point was that all Yuzu ever did was fall asleep while watching the matches, then every time I yelled about Toshiro scoring, she would flip out and start chanting his name. It got so annoying that eventually I started just watching the matches in my room no matter how crappy that old TV was.