197 ~ Stolen Life, Taken Love

May 01, 2012 22:13

This Suethor has written a fic for Twilight.

Title:Stolen Life, Taken Love
Name: Kei Urahara “Aimi” as Aizen calls her.
Suethor:KlancyAnn It used to be Anme-gurl-2012
Pairings: Aizen.Kei
Rating: Gin
Stats: 5 chapters, 6,923 words, 17 reviews; average: 1200 words and 3 revies.
Appearance: “ long pale blonde hair “
Sue Qualifications: The Sue is kidnapped by Aizen for no apparent reason and then we get a “But... You can't find out this story, if you don't know the beginning.” and rewind to find out that she is Urahara and Yourichi's daughter. I think... They take a picture and Yourichi says they really aren't a family. She gets a message from Toshiro that the head captain wishes to speak with her. She is that special. Yamamoto tells her that Aizen wishes to kidnap her because of her power. She has a special fighting ability and healing. So, instead of kidnapping Orihime who he can easily manipulate because she isn't a fighter and has a healing ability, he kidnaps the one most likely to fight back. Nothing much happens and she is assigned I think Yimichika and Ikkaku to babysit her and they can't prevent her from
Annoying Attributes:Why would Aizen be interested in an immature teenager? Of course, he might use one as a toy for personal pleasure, but I have yet to see a fic that does this. I'm reminded of some of the Chase/OC pairings I've read from Xiolin Showdown in the fact the roles of Aizen and Chase's attitudes should be reversed as Chase has honor and Aizen does not.


Sample
A teenage girl is sitting on the porch of candy shop. Her long pale blonde hair flys in the quick moving wind. The tops of her eyelids flutter as she opens them to reveal large emerald green eyes. She lets out a laugh as a pair of dark arms in circle her thin waist and tickle her.

"Mom! MOM! STOP!" She squeals rolling over, hitting her head on the ground. "OUCH! Dad! Help!"

She continued to giggle, as the tan women tickled her harder. A man leaning agianst the wall of the shop pulled down the hood of his striped hat. The tan women pulled away, and jumped up pulling the young girl up with her.

"Oh, Kei. Calm down," the taller women says, ruffling her hair. The man walks forward the sun shining down on him, the pale strands of blonde hair shine as he nears the two girls. He leans into the cane he walks with, and glances to the mother.

"Jinta! Come on, I actually got them together!"

Jinta comes running out of the shop, a camera. He skids infront of the three people, and yells.

"SMILE!"

The camera snaps, as the people turn to it.

rating: 5 - gin, related: yourichi, related: urahara, pairing aizen/oc

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