109: High School Trouble! ~ Iloveanime9493
Note: I was actually going to do a very different fanfic yesterday, but when I got a really good look at that fanfic, I decided I wanted to also long spork the three chapters that were there. Because if this, I am actually going to post two today. (Sometimes I just post more then one just because I want to.)
Title: High School Trouble!
Name: Hinamori Momo
Suethor: Iloveanime9493
Rating: Ganju
Pairings: Toshiro/Momo
Appearance: Like canon.
Background: This fanfic is a high school AU. In this story, Momo is actually related to Unohana and Isane, where Isane is the sister and Unohana is the mother.
Sue Qualifications: Hinamori is clumsy and it gets her to fall into Toshiro's arms. Glancing through the chapters, I think only the second one is where the whole clumsiness appears.
Annoying Attributes: Well, there is a reason that I equate the rabid Toshiro/Momo fans to being like Twihards. Twilight Sue has gotten a ton of fanfics that go absolutely no where, well... this one is thirteen. I've also noted that a LOT of Toshiro/Momo fanfics seem to be, well... high school AUs. That said, I think a lot of the Toshiro/Momo fans are in denial about certain aspects of the their pairing.
Prime example... in the Suethor's profile, she clearly states that she hates a certain +Blood pairing because the two characters are siblings. Yet she likes the pairing between Toshiro and Momo because it is a classic child hood friend senario, completely overlooking the fact that these two also grew up as siblings.
That said, I've honestly been holding back on posting Toshiro/Momo fanfics because I haven't wanted to step on toes of the non-rabid fans. However, this pairing has got to have some of the biggest archival of badfic ever.
Sample: (From the second chapter... and normally I don't post a whole chapter as a sample... but... the chapters are horribly short until number thirteen...)
Hinamori was still in shocked that her school was so big! She slowly walked towards the school and walked through the door. Her eyes widen even more. The school look so perfect to her. The lockers were nice and wide, enough room to put your big ass book bag in (A/N: my locker is the same!). The lights were very bright, so bright she thought she might need sunglasses. As she walk through the hallway, she notice that the floor were a little slippery. They must have been polished. She walked carefully, but not careful enough. Soon she accidentally slept and was about to fall when she felt two strong arms around her waist. Hinamori looked up to see a white spiky hair guy looking down at her. She had to admit, he was kind of cute.
" Oi, you got to be more careful. Theses floors are slippery and hard." The boy told her as he helped her up. " Thanks for catching me." Hinamori said with a little blush on her face. "No prob. See you around." He said as he left. All momo could do was just stare at him until he was gone.
After he left, momo decided to get to her first class. She took out her map she got in the mail along with her schedule. "hmmm… room 315… its on the third floor." She said, a little confuse, as she headed towards the staircase. But since she was so busy looking at her schedule and map, she did the person walking up to her. Soon enough they bumped into each other. Both fell to the ground. Hard.
" I am so sorry I didn't mean to" momo said as picked up her stuff and walked over the raven-haired girl she bump into. "Here, let me help you up" momo said as she put out her hand. "Thanks" the girl said as she took hold of hinamori's hand.
"Hey you must be new here. What's your name?" the girl asked
"My name is hinamori momo and yours"
"Mine is Kuchiki Rukia"
"Nice to meet you rukia. Can you help me find my class I'm a little lost" momo asked. Rukia took a look at her schedule. She smiled and said " I have all the same classes as you! I can show you around." " Really! Thank you!" momo said with a big smile on her face. Soon both of them ran upstairs before the bell rang. While they were running, momo couldn't help but think about the white hair boy she met.
'I didn't even catch his name and already I'm starting to like him' she thought as they finally reach their classroom.