97.) Bleached Moon - Glasvenster
For the following week, I bring you Twilight Crossover Special Week, and twilightsue brings you Bleach Crossover Special Week, where we tag team and do the same entries each week. Here entry is number 113.
Title: Bleached Moon
Name: Rai Keskei
Suethor: Glasvenster
Rating: Soifon
Pairings: Kenpachi/Unohana, Jacob/Bella
Appearance: There is no description of him in the fanfic. However, if you google Rai Keskei, you get him in a lot of RPG. In one, he is twenty, captain of the fifth division, deep mahogany hair with green eyes with a different background and in another, he is twenty five with the same hair color and eye color. I may very well come back and spork those to RPG pages when I am done with Twilight week.
Background: “I dreamed back to when I was nothing more than a small child in the soul society. I was with my parents my father was teaching me how to wield a sword while my mother was trying to convince me that healing other was better. I guess m father won that one.” Since we're supposed to guess who his parents are, I would say Kenpachi and Unohana, except... while I like this pairing, for them to have had a child way back then is highly improbable.
Sue Qualifications: First, in this fanfic, Rai's background has problems. As I've said, I like the pairing, but the way they act right now, they need character development before that pairing will come true. Second, he some how ends up in America, no explanation as to how, considering all the people in Soul Society have Japanese names, one can assume that different areas have different Soul Societies. Actually, if you've read the draft for Bleach, you know that Tite Kubo actually had that concept, so while it isn't mentioned, it can be safely assumed. Third, this fanfic tries to say that Saijin's blood line comes from Twilight's wolves because he is a hybrid and the Bount are related somehow to Twilight's vampires. He makes it so that Bella become a Bount instead of a vampire.
Annoying Attributes: Let's see, the first chapter practically quotes a good portion of the twilight books. Rai's story about the Bounts doesn't add up to canon, I mean... for one thing, it was a thousand years ago, and they were all born during the same time. Bella just has a doll handed to her by this guy, rather then her awakening it herself. He also follows along with what Mayuri wants to do. I really dislike fanfics that slap two things together, simply because there are wizards in both, or in this case, vampires.
Sample:
Chapter 1:
"Fine, my name is Rai Keskei, and I come from Japan, there I told you where I am from as well, now what did you argue about."
"They, no more like Sam, the black wolf wanted to kill Bella because she is going to become a vampire and endanger us all. I refused to stand aside and my gene that made me the true Alpha kicked in and I guess the pack splintered now it is just me alone in my own pack."
"Shame dude, if you want you can stay at my place for the time being I have a huge house and I am the only one living there."
"Sounds great, where is it?"
"Out in the woods." His answer was of the kind that didn't expose detail why he was so secretive.
We arrived at Bella's car. He walked over and put her in the middle and got in on the driers side, he called me over and motioned with his hands that I should get in on the passenger side. His head disappeared under the steering wheel, there was a few sparks and the engine roared to life.
"Where did you learn how to hot wire a car?" I asked.
"1960, this particular model as well." He answered with a grin. How old was he I wondered. He didn't look any older than 19 but I had this feeling that he was a lot older than that.
We drove to his house in silence. I could see it looming up ahead. It was quite large it was as big as the Cullen house and I had only seen that once from a distance.
"The fridge is stocked full so if you are hungry you can help yourself. I just have to put Bella in a bed so that she can change in peace. The medication I gave her will lengthen the process so it will take a little more than three days. You can take your pick of any of the bedrooms except for the master bedroom, the one with the largest bed. All the rooms are stocked with clothes they are all my size so it would be a bit big for you but it should be fine you can also use the bathroom on the bottom story to cleanup because to be quite frank you don't smell so great, "
Chapter 2:
The cool night air was refreshing and it was nice to be out of that gigai. I didn't know if Jacob can see spirits so I decided to get out the window. Once outside I shunpo'd away. I felt the sickening reiatsu of a hollow in the area but it felt stronger than your average hollow. I found an Arrancar, luckily he wasn't a full one yet with about half of his mask missing. It still had its animal like body then to my horror I saw it crouch over the body of a dead police officer. I looked around to see if the spirit of the man was still around here. I saw him cowering in fear. His chain was broken and I knew there was nothing I could do for him, but the Arrancar was about to have a very sudden end to its miserable life. I drew my twin zanpakuto. The sheaths dispersing into shadow particles. They hovered in the air for a few seconds before, clumping together to form armored plates on my arms.
I lunged at the Arrancer. Who managed to doge at the last second avoiding th killer strike. However I did manage to take off one of its arms. The hollow roared in pain and lunged at me. In one blindingly fast motion I initiated six well aimed cut, cutting right through the Arrancar. The body of the slain beast landed on the ground.
"Haien," I muttered under my breath, the purples flames consumed the body of the Arrancar, leaving nothing but ash. I went over to the soul of the terrified police officer. He looked familiar, but I didn't know where I had seen him before.
"Are, you okay?" I knew it was a pretty pointless question to ask a dead person but I wasn't good at this kind of thing
"Fine I guess for being dead. What was that thing?" He looked much calmer now and not as frightened.
"That my good sir was a Hollow, a human soul who has lost its heart, it is nothing more than a bloodthirsty animal." I didn't want to go into the details of the different types that you get, but who cares. A hollow is a hollow they just have different power and thought levels.
Chapter Three:
"Seven hundred years ago, Soul Society started on a secrete project to creat stronger humans to combat hollow - evil spirits that eat your soul - anyway the project was making no progress until we started including vampires into the experiment. The enzyme wasn't enough to change the humans so we went and found something to use as a catalyst. The project never kicked off because of moral issues, but the captain of the twelfth division and my fellow crazy scientist continued the research. He later perfected and the result is what Bella is now. A Bount, basically a vampire that lives of the energy a human soul possesses. In doing so they become immortal, luckily for us we produce excess spiritual energy which Bella will subconsciously feed on, and until she makes the switch from passive to active feeding, you Jacob will be unable to change into a wolf when close to her." I my heart dropped a bit when he told me this and the division thing also confused but the whole Bount thing really freaked me out.
Chapter Four:
"The Bount enzyme, I found someone bitten by a vampire and injected them with the enzyme and it worked they are a fully functional Bount with a Doll." I continued excitedly.
"Oh that is good news, anything new you found?" he asked knowing I would have found something out.
"Yes, I have discovered why Sajin looks like an animal hybrid. But I need you to do a DNA test on the spiritual signature to be one hundred percent certain, I sent the data I recovered just before I called, it should be in your inbox." There was a lot of clicking on his end of the line and then the creepy laugh he always does. Then there was a beeping of the machine and an electronic voice said "Positive match found", followed by more maniac laughing from Mayuri.