December Flashfic for hashire

[overtoned]

Title: Vanishing Point
Author's Name: overtoned
Recipient’s Name: hashire
Pairing/Character: Ishida+/Rukia
Rating: PG
Warning: This time's flashfic was really, hard. D: This was the only pairing I was remotely capable of writing, and I'm afraid I haven't done a very good job.
Author's Note: This is my last time participating in bleach_flashfic. Thank you everyone, it's been

Comments

[shalomdebbie]

Oh no! Not a bad job at all! Just wonderful, wonderful work with the narrative voice! Oh, and I love good canon filler pieces--you have to really illuminate the scenes to make them work, and that all happened here:

He finished his ridiculous monologue and proceeded to assemble his bow. She watched him incredulously as he challenged Abarai Renji, fukutaicho of the ninth division, a person who would greatly enjoy ripping his ass, to a duel.

There were so many things she would like to erase with this picture.

The details SHONE. Very very nice work!

[overtoned]

Debbie! I haven't heard from you in a long time. :)

I'm glad you liked it. :D

[empath_eia]

Damn, I had a lovely comment all typed out but then the connection at work died and I lost it. The gist of it was this:

NOOOOOOOOOOO JAZZY YOU CAN'T LEAVE I ABSOLUTELY FORBID IT

The Bleach fandom needs you. This fic is a gem, all your fics are, and it would be utterly tragic if you left forever.

Perhaps if you took a break? For your health? *hopeful*

♥

[overtoned]

eia! :DD

I'm just moseying away from Bleach_flashfic, but I'm still going to try write. :D I'm glad you liked this!

And yes, for health. ;-;

[egelantier]

oh, oh, just oh. I've read it without glancing at author's name and yet somehow knew it was yours. cold, and sharp, and angry, and just...

I love many things about this fic, from overall idea to this or that turn of phrase, but mostly for image of Ishida treading her reiatsu into the doll he sews. just... <3.

[overtoned]

:O Really? Is it that obvious?

[egelantier]

your stories always have very distinctive voice, yeah )

[overtoned]

{D! Yaye. (assuming that it's a good distinction. >3)

[sinulatan]

I think you've done a very good job of writing this, though. :D I also admire your use of canon scenes that made the connection more real.

[overtoned]

:DDDDD Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[hashire]

OK, so. I don't know if you're going to see this or not because I'm almost six years late (fffffffffffff I suck). I thought I had never gotten my fic and sort of stopped watching the comm back in late '07/early '08 mostly because I never followed through on mine and felt guilty or something...sorry person whose request I was supposed to fill and never did ugh. Anyway, I can't remember what I asked for anymore, but this was lovely. Thank you for writing this for me! Sorry I'm so late!