Playing With Titles

Jul 19, 2016 18:19

I'm weary of referring to Book Three and Book Four, so I'm kicking around ideas.

I've mentioned before I want to keep the same rhythm for Three and Four -- NOUN of NOUN.

The frontrunners right now are a word-match of ash, flesh, flame matched with life and strifeFlame of Strife ( Read more... )

desert rising, writing, thoughtspinning

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harvey_rrit July 20 2016, 06:14:56 UTC
Flame of Life
Ash of Strife

has meaning, it seems to me.

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gnibbles July 21 2016, 01:09:10 UTC
+1 for

Ash of Strife
Flame of Life

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blairmacg July 21 2016, 01:40:04 UTC
Well, there's two votes for the combo... :)

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harvey_rrit July 21 2016, 05:15:14 UTC
I dunno. The first way I intended to be simply descriptive, but the second seems like a message of reassurance.

I still like the first way, but that's because my own experience of being reassured is by someone who hasn't got the word yet.

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blairmacg July 24 2016, 22:04:18 UTC
I see what you mean, and admit the grimmer side of my writerly self keeps whispering, "No, end the series with Ash of Life because YOU KNOW WHY." :-)

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