Reviews for Pinioning
So FFN is apparently deleting explicit stories (on top of deleting stories with non-G-rated summaries and titles), so I'm just saving the reviews I actually care about. Yep.
MangaGaki 4/21/12 . chapter 1
Ohmigawd. This made me cry so much...
This was absolutely beautiful...and the bathroom scene...*breaks down is tears*
Favourited.
Lauren
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To the Sky 8/21/11 . chapter 1
How does this not have more than two reviews...?
I loved this. From beginning, to end. The emotions are raw and clear, the descriptions perfect - sometimes you have to be graphic to get a point across. The concept of Morty being able to 'suck emotions' out of a person is also very intriguing. I honestly teared up, reading through this, and with the parallels in the beginning to the last line delivered by Morty, I started crying all over again.
From one Honorshipper to another, thank you for posting up this wonderful story. I'm heartbroken and sated at the same time, because this is all there is. I truly hope to see more from you in the future.
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anon 8/13/11 . chapter 1
Really great read. There was something both horrifying and heartfelt evoked when reading this piece. Admittedly, the first part was hard to go through which is a testament to your finesse as a writer to not go overboard. I agree with the aforementioned reviewer, the bathroom scene was both emotional and almost a catharsis for the first half. Some parts were a bit choppy, but overall it didn't detract from the wretchedness of the emotions coursing through the story- as well as how great the impact of the final few lines were. Fantastic job, thank you for writing. Side note: upon reading the story, it made the story summary even more touching.
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xPhineasx 8/11/11 . chapter 1
3 Oh god, this was beautiful. That scene in the bathroom when Morty first finds out is gorgeous.
MangaGaki 4/21/12 . chapter 1
Ohmigawd. This made me cry so much...
This was absolutely beautiful...and the bathroom scene...*breaks down is tears*
Favourited.
Lauren
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To the Sky 8/21/11 . chapter 1
How does this not have more than two reviews...?
I loved this. From beginning, to end. The emotions are raw and clear, the descriptions perfect - sometimes you have to be graphic to get a point across. The concept of Morty being able to 'suck emotions' out of a person is also very intriguing. I honestly teared up, reading through this, and with the parallels in the beginning to the last line delivered by Morty, I started crying all over again.
From one Honorshipper to another, thank you for posting up this wonderful story. I'm heartbroken and sated at the same time, because this is all there is. I truly hope to see more from you in the future.
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anon 8/13/11 . chapter 1
Really great read. There was something both horrifying and heartfelt evoked when reading this piece. Admittedly, the first part was hard to go through which is a testament to your finesse as a writer to not go overboard. I agree with the aforementioned reviewer, the bathroom scene was both emotional and almost a catharsis for the first half. Some parts were a bit choppy, but overall it didn't detract from the wretchedness of the emotions coursing through the story- as well as how great the impact of the final few lines were. Fantastic job, thank you for writing. Side note: upon reading the story, it made the story summary even more touching.
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xPhineasx 8/11/11 . chapter 1
3 Oh god, this was beautiful. That scene in the bathroom when Morty first finds out is gorgeous.