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If I had it My Way I'd Slit Your Throat with the Knife You Left in My Back(1/?)

Jul 09, 2009 17:22

Title: If I had it My Way I'd Slit Your Throat with the Knife You Left in My Back(1/?)
Author: blackstar147
Rating: R
Pairing: Tom Sykes/ Ian Watkins (so far)+ Sykecest
POV: 3rd
Summary: Oli likes his little brother maybe a bit too much, but no one seems to like Oli.
Beta: Any offers?!?
Warnings: Non con. sex, kidnap (I suppose), lots of violence and umm... ( Read more... )

sykecest, tom sykes, ian watkins, oli sykes

Comments 17

fc fo shizzle? candycrusher July 9 2009, 17:25:29 UTC

This is really good, your language is so good and fits the story, and I like how you've focused on the surroundings and feelings of the characters and not only on the actual plot. That sounded kind of weird but I hope you'll undertsrand my rambling. XD

Anyway, I look forward to read more! :D

Re: fc fo shizzle? blackstar147 July 9 2009, 17:35:48 UTC

:O FC... that deserves fc cookies!!! *hands* XD
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, and it makes a change writing a story based in England, cause i suck at trying to use American words all the time! (I'm English)
Haha it's ok, i understood the rambling...
not sure when i'll update next, i would say next thursday, but i'm not that patient and it's already typed up!

Thank you for reading anyway and i'm sooo glad you liked it!!!
XD

shadow_hive July 9 2009, 17:41:30 UTC

I loved< 3 I wanna give Oli a cuddle

blackstar147 July 10 2009, 11:39:12 UTC

Thank you XD
Go for it... I think he needs one!!

shadow_hive July 10 2009, 12:51:56 UTC

Yay!
*squishes him*

blackstar147 July 10 2009, 13:25:19 UTC

fruityahren July 9 2009, 23:35:55 UTC

Poor poor Oli. He should accept that he and Tom are great together already.

Although Tom/Ian is pretty fucking awesome too.

Looking forward to the next chapter, for sure.

blackstar147 July 10 2009, 11:40:18 UTC

XD
I know.. someone really needs to tell him!!!
Haha you may need to reserve some judgement on that pairing...
i like Ian, but maybe not in this fic!
haha hope you will like the next one too then!
XD

havah24601 July 11 2009, 07:23:40 UTC

This is BEYOND awesome! Can we have more? PLEASE?!

blackstar147 July 11 2009, 14:54:26 UTC

>.<
Thank you mdear!!!
Haha soon, soon! I'm still not sure when to update yet! But i do think every week is tooooo long.. so we shall see! XD
<3

havah24601 July 11 2009, 19:53:53 UTC

<3
IT IS TOO LONG! IT IS!

blackstar147 July 12 2009, 12:37:08 UTC

XD
Well i shall have to wait for my beta first... but soon i promise!
<3

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blackstar147 July 13 2009, 12:36:44 UTC

XD
Thank you for reading.. glad you liked it!
The next chapter will be up sooooon!!!
<3