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mindyracal in blackpearlsails

Drabble Challenge: Etiquette

Mar 19, 2009 07:57

“Don’t speak to me about proper etiquette, Captain. From the looks of your unkempt appearance, you lack in that department,” she spat back as she shoved the fork into her mouth, chomping off the bit of chicken.

Jack smiled. Little Lolita may have been one of the favorites in Tortuga, but she was no simpleton. Born and raised, as least that’s what ( Read more... )

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redvelvetcanopy March 19 2009, 13:19:58 UTC

Cheeky pirate, indeed!

mindyracal March 19 2009, 13:29:45 UTC

Thanks, luv! Yes...we do love our cheeky Jack! What would we do without him? Thanks for commenting!

sharklady35 March 19 2009, 14:57:04 UTC

I have noticed Jack has a streak of refinement to him (and developed theories about where he acquired it.) Yes, I can believe he'd think chewing with one's mouth open was crossing the line.

BTW: Where'd you get that photo of ferocious!Jack, mindyracal?

mindyracal March 19 2009, 15:03:50 UTC

He can be quite refined, can he not? Such a complicated wonderful creature.

BTW...got it from photobucket. *wink*

Thanks for commenting!

sharklady35 March 19 2009, 15:09:10 UTC

> Such a complicated wonderful creature. <

Indeed! That's exactly why he's so much fun to write about.

compassrose7577 March 19 2009, 15:46:55 UTC

Interesting scene: two people living in a world where they both have to hide their civility and education.

Oh, the stories that could be told there!

I'm still back on watching that fork make its nice, slow, exaggerated withdrawl from his mouth. Oh, doesn't that paint a picture!

Good stuff!

mindyracal March 19 2009, 16:32:30 UTC

Oh, the stories that could be told there!

Something tells me I might be making a story out of it....been thought of after I wrote this this morning....

And I as well can't get that image of Jack and the fork. Goes back to when he was talking to Barbossa in the first movie with the apple...*good lord*

Thanks for commenting!!

pearlseed March 19 2009, 15:55:44 UTC

Now that's a picture for ya! Jack doing anything slowly with that mouth, 'nuff to make your chest erectile tissue come to attention! And if said actions would confound a Tortuga 'lady' then myohmy, what devastation they might wreck in the general populace! LOL

mindyracal March 19 2009, 16:33:07 UTC

Glad to see you enjoyed it!!

Thanks for the comment!

mary684 March 20 2009, 00:31:24 UTC

Oh very wonderful! Tortuga's an interesting town, innit it? Never know what one might find if one were to scratch the surface. And oh my, Jack Sparrow drawling and taking his sweet ole time with that fork in his mouth. That's a lovely sight! Thanks, luv.

mindyracal March 20 2009, 02:45:59 UTC

Thanks for the comment! Much appreciated!

And yes....Jack can bring out the best in all of us!