Look What I Found...
I remember joining an FLB community where we had to write challenages based on FLB books. I found the ones i wrote and wanted to share
Title: Song Of Echo
Challenge Title: #10 Sound of A Story
Book(s): Echo
Character(s): Echo
Word Count:100
Author's Notes: Its been very difficult for me to write anything let alone something like this but i thought i'd try it anyway, please give me some tips and such to repair my writing style. i dont think i did to well on this one lol
Echo could feel the crushing inside from the ocean of tears fighting to smash into the cavity of her chest. She held in the torrent of the storm, keeping her stride quick, and in tempo with the shore. Collapsing on the sand she made herself sit up and take in gulps of air, only to swallow more tears. At last she heard the cracking of her smile as her laugh broke the silence, sliding down her tongue and echoing through the hollow parts of her bones. Breaking bones, and water unpleasantly washing away the stains left from before you ever came.
Title:In Pieces
Challenge: Mirror Mirror
Book: Missing Angel Juan
Characters: Witch Baby
Word Count: 100
Notes: I dont think i did too well but i tried, i also feel i didnt do well with my imagery, but please let me know so i can do it again lol
Witch baby wrapped herself inside the crushing folds of the purple silk. Her lanky arms tried so hard to grasp her tiny body, shaking away a feeling of self-doubt, only to bubble up again in the most remorse way. She finally slide to the ground, still holding on for dear life, the bones they only broke louder, squeezing the breath out of her concave chest, “breathe only for one more day” Crack, shatter and all was broken in front of her. It was just a mirror, but she saw more then the reflection would allow her to feel. Only Herself.
Title:Dont Leave
Challenge Title: A Better Anwser
Book(s): Missing Angel Juan
Character(s): Angel Juan and Witch Baby
Word Count:100
Author's Notes: Im verry new at this so i need some good feedback, pleaase!
Angel Juan could see the angels in a purple glow taking flight whenever he set his own eyes upon witch baby. She blinked once and they were still there, bathing in the mystic shade of amethyst, never once folding their wings. “And where do I go to now?” Witch baby’s eyes squinted slightly fighting back the acid in her tone. Angel Juan’s arms were sliding down, lower and rising to the place where he knew so well, within her arms. “You stay right here with me.” The only wind that passes through them was the sound of their monotone breathing.
and those were the only ones i wrote... what do you think?
Title: Song Of Echo
Challenge Title: #10 Sound of A Story
Book(s): Echo
Character(s): Echo
Word Count:100
Author's Notes: Its been very difficult for me to write anything let alone something like this but i thought i'd try it anyway, please give me some tips and such to repair my writing style. i dont think i did to well on this one lol
Echo could feel the crushing inside from the ocean of tears fighting to smash into the cavity of her chest. She held in the torrent of the storm, keeping her stride quick, and in tempo with the shore. Collapsing on the sand she made herself sit up and take in gulps of air, only to swallow more tears. At last she heard the cracking of her smile as her laugh broke the silence, sliding down her tongue and echoing through the hollow parts of her bones. Breaking bones, and water unpleasantly washing away the stains left from before you ever came.
Title:In Pieces
Challenge: Mirror Mirror
Book: Missing Angel Juan
Characters: Witch Baby
Word Count: 100
Notes: I dont think i did too well but i tried, i also feel i didnt do well with my imagery, but please let me know so i can do it again lol
Witch baby wrapped herself inside the crushing folds of the purple silk. Her lanky arms tried so hard to grasp her tiny body, shaking away a feeling of self-doubt, only to bubble up again in the most remorse way. She finally slide to the ground, still holding on for dear life, the bones they only broke louder, squeezing the breath out of her concave chest, “breathe only for one more day” Crack, shatter and all was broken in front of her. It was just a mirror, but she saw more then the reflection would allow her to feel. Only Herself.
Title:Dont Leave
Challenge Title: A Better Anwser
Book(s): Missing Angel Juan
Character(s): Angel Juan and Witch Baby
Word Count:100
Author's Notes: Im verry new at this so i need some good feedback, pleaase!
Angel Juan could see the angels in a purple glow taking flight whenever he set his own eyes upon witch baby. She blinked once and they were still there, bathing in the mystic shade of amethyst, never once folding their wings. “And where do I go to now?” Witch baby’s eyes squinted slightly fighting back the acid in her tone. Angel Juan’s arms were sliding down, lower and rising to the place where he knew so well, within her arms. “You stay right here with me.” The only wind that passes through them was the sound of their monotone breathing.
and those were the only ones i wrote... what do you think?