Comments | blacklid: Socket, Valve, Heart

blacklid

Socket, Valve, Heart

Nov 18, 2007 17:49

Summary: Sam works himself into a corner on the Impala.
Category: Generic character story. Oneshot.
Timeline: Coda for Fresh Blood (3.07)
Characters: Sam & Dean
Wordcount: 341
Rating: PG
Written: Nov. 18th, 2007
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fanfic, impala, my stories, gearhead, fic: 15_minute_fic, cnk 80q3, sam and dean own my soul

Comments 47

may7fic November 19 2007, 01:39:56 UTC

Oh, yeah, that scene absolutely gutted me so more is of course better. This was a lovely little add-on.
Thank-you.

blacklid November 20 2007, 04:35:48 UTC

Thank you! Oddly enough, this is the one scene in the episode that makes me smile rather than cry. I cry during Lucy's scene (Sam!) and Dixon's scene (Dean!), when Sam agrees too easily to kill Gordon and the point when Dean finally pushes Sam too far... "jus cause", breaks me. But this one is the iconic Sam and Dean - what they would be if their lives were normal. Makes me forget about the evil around them for just a little while.

may7fic November 20 2007, 05:24:04 UTC

Ah, it was a beautiful moment but for me John's absence/presence was felt strongly which is where I found it hard. John's knowledge being passed from Dean and now to Sam - the car being a symbol of home and family but also of everything they've lost and are going to lose. I really found it devastating.

The other scenes you mention were gorgeous and certainly moved me too. It was a terrific ep.

Thanks again for adding to it.

tabaqui November 19 2007, 01:43:44 UTC

Ah, man.
*wipes eyes*
That was perfect. His frustration and bewilderment over the engine shifting to it being about *Dean* and how Dean just comes over and quietly is *there* and....
*sniffle*
I love it.

blacklid November 20 2007, 04:39:13 UTC

*hands you a tissue*
I'm so glad you like it. These boys, they say so much without words, don't they? :)

dontknowmyname November 19 2007, 01:46:52 UTC

oh god that scene was amazing! I love them so much... and your writing was AWESOME! Thank you for sharing =).

blacklid November 20 2007, 04:41:45 UTC

The J's Sam and Dean are made of awesome. I only dabble ineptly in their sandbox. Thanks for reading - and the comment! These little fics have been perfect for my attention span lately. LOL

embroiderama November 19 2007, 01:50:59 UTC

This brought tears to my eyes in so few words. Lovely!

blacklid November 20 2007, 04:44:13 UTC

*hands out Kleenex* Dean will always take care of Sam, even when he's invisibi-bi-ble. Cause he's a sekkrit ninja. :) Thank you for telling me. I can't stop smiling.

flynn_boyant November 19 2007, 02:05:22 UTC

Thank you! *hugs*
This was beautiful and heart breaking and, just...I'm not sure I have the words to describe it. I'm just so glad that someone wrote something in honor of that wonderful scene. And you, without a doubt, did it justice.
Loved it!

blacklid November 20 2007, 04:46:18 UTC

Wow, I'm honored and glad that you enjoyed it so much. *hugs back*