Comments | blackdracaena: Footie RPS Ficlet: Inside My Heart (Ronnie/Arjen, PG)

blackdracaena

Footie RPS Ficlet: Inside My Heart (Ronnie/Arjen, PG)

Jul 01, 2005 14:04

Inside My Heart
by ~Dracaena~

Disclaimer: Obviously this has never happened!

Rating: PG
Pairing: Cristiano Ronaldo/Arjen Robben
Feedback: Yes, please.

Summary: Arjen crossed a line he shouldn't have and now he's dreading Cristiano's return.

Author's Note:
This is based on Ronnie/Arjen from the RPG theinsidestoryThere is Dutch dialogue in it but it still ( Read more... )

arjen robben, fic, cristiano ronaldo

Comments 25

leetje July 1 2005, 12:45:00 UTC

ack so cute our boys iieee! *loffs muchly* This so fits the RPG, oh yes it does!

*squishes*

Thank you dear :)

blackdracaena July 1 2005, 12:49:08 UTC

*smiles*
Thank you, darling.
I'm glad you like this as I wrote it for you.
*squishes*

Now you go and write Ronnie's POV! *nods*

leetje July 1 2005, 13:08:41 UTC

*huggles* Of course I like it!

I shall try the POV. Pondering his feelings at the mo.

blackdracaena July 1 2005, 13:23:23 UTC

*huggles*
Whoot! I'm really looking forward to your piece of this because I would love to have a peek inside of Ronnie's mind. Your Ronnie is just so adorable. *squishes him* *squishes you*

winter_solstice July 1 2005, 12:53:34 UTC

this is perfect. i never really imagined Cris to be the type of person who holds grudges. :)

blackdracaena July 1 2005, 13:06:44 UTC

Thank you.
Nah, I don't think that this Ronnie holds any grudges and certainly not with Arjen as they have been together for so long (in this ficlet) but I wanted to do a bit of angst. So Arjen had to worry. ;)

winter_solstice July 1 2005, 13:12:10 UTC

it's good for Arjen to worry. ;)

unitedforever July 1 2005, 13:14:36 UTC

Awww, it's lovely. So I assume you play Robben in the RPG?

Thinking about it, these two would actually fit together quite well, both the same age as well. I love the inclusion of Dutch dialogue as well. Sometimes it surprises me, though I always say I don't really like my own language, how much I enjoy seeing it randomly pop up. In fics, for example.

I liked this. Well done.

blackdracaena July 1 2005, 13:20:54 UTC

Thank you. *smiles*
Yes, I play Arjen... *whistles*

I have to admit that outside the RPG they don't make much sense as playing for different clubs and all that. Yet both are wingers and of the same age and both equally talented. They are both the exact opposites of each other and maybe that's what I like so much about them.

Heheheh... the Dutch dialogue was something I just wanted to do. This was actually intended to be a drabble but then I decided that this needed more than 100 words.

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback and I'm happy you like this.

kniggit_slash July 1 2005, 13:21:26 UTC

I love when fics make me work through them. Had to run and grab my Dutch translator!

Loved it!

blackdracaena July 1 2005, 13:24:26 UTC

Hehehe.
I assume your Dutch translator was Sea? ;)

Very glad you liked it. :D

kniggit_slash July 1 2005, 13:29:57 UTC

Yes, she was. Dragged her butt out of bed to get it translated! It is too late to be sleeping.

Was a good fic.

neonsigns July 1 2005, 13:55:10 UTC

I don't know Dutch, but it was still an awesome fic!

I didn't think the pairing would work for me, but it did, so congrats on that ;P I loved it.

blackdracaena July 2 2005, 03:49:00 UTC

Thank you, very happy to hear you liked it.
I tried to make it work for those who don't know any Dutch.
Glad to hear it still made sense.
And yeah, this pairing isn't something a lot of people like but I'm glad you liked it anyway. *smiles*