[public] football/soccer rps

[blackandwhite02]

An Abrupt Descent (Not the Ending You Were Looking For)Football/Soccer RPS, Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso, R (for language, sex, and general darkness

Comments

[wonderkid]

I love that title. ;)

Even though I was half-asleep and generally incoherent at the time, I think you know how much I adore this fic. (Um, adsfklkg, lots!)

There will be more later, when the crowd isn’t around, and Steven lets his grin widen as he backs away and faces the other direction.

That's still my favorite part. You heartbreaker, you.

[blackandwhite02]

You are the last person I am responding to because I figured you were the lowest priority. Which sounds more insulting that it is but I'm sure you know what I mean (right?). And I have nothing specific to say about this comment because, y'know, I think we covered it all. So. . .yeah. There are other comments of yours that I hope to respond to tomorrow night when I'm not as inexplicably tired as I am. But I finally watched ep 3.2 of Grey's Anatomy, so that's good.

God, I really have nothing to say.

[analysezceci]

Gorgeous writing.

(They say it’s a one time thing and then a one last time and then they decided that they could either stop justifying it or stop doing it and they stopped counting then.)

Love that line. And I have a thing for parentheses in fics.

[blackandwhite02]

I don't think that I need to comment on my own fondness for parentheses in fics. Thanks for reading.

[stjarna1984]

Whoa. That took my breath away.

I'll just be over here, incoherent...

[blackandwhite02]

Glad it had such an effect on you. Thanks for reading.

[brainiac9]

So I read this fic, and then, having read it, determined that I had to comment because it was so ... well. Then I got to the writing and realized that there weren't actually any words to accurately describe it without sounding ridiculously cheesy or what have you. It totally killed me. The wonderful moments distributed between the terrible gave everything that much more depth - the loss means that much more when you know exactly what it is that's gone.

[blackandwhite02]

I know exactly the feeling you are referring to; I feel it often myself when responding to fic. But I'm amazed that I can draw such a reaction myself! Thanks for reading.

[miman]

*cries*

[blackandwhite02]

Sorry for any tears but I'm glad it inspired such a strong reaction. Thanks for reading.