Title: When a nerd falls for a jock...
Author:black_wind123
Genre: High school AU, Romance, Friendship,Fluff, Angst...
Warning(s): Bullying, Rape
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17
Pairing(s): JongYu (main), 2min, EunHae, YooSu, slight OnKey, Bff!OnTae, Bff!KeyJongHo
Summary: Jinki was living his life happily as a nerd when suddenly the unexpected happens and he has
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Can I just say that this is my favourite chapter yet? It wasn't just Teamin who wasn't breathing. I wasn't breathing either. When Jonghyun started hitting Jinki I was screaming "Noo!" I sighed in relief when Yonghwa and Leeteuk came. And then their conversation tells me that Yonghwa did something really bad to Jonghyun in the past. Or may be the whole Cratus did. But anyway, Jonghyun seem to hate them so much.
LOL, Jonghyun called Jinki shit face! X'D I found it funny as helll. I actually read it a few times because it was just that funny.
Nickhun is completely crazy. He just went on and on about how hot he is and everything and that was funny too. I like how you include slight humor in your fic. When he said he will help Jinki I thought he actually will. Poor Jinki. He has no way to get out of Jonghyun's trap.
My favourite bit was of coure the Eunhyuk/Donghae bit. I don't see why you should be embarassed because it was perfect. :)
And Taemin and Jinki are just so cute together! I don't even like Ontae but you're kind of making me like them! :O
I loved it, seriously. I will patiently wait for the next chapter so update soon. And thanks for the spot babe <3
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Well you're going to have to wait to find out why Jonghyun hates them so much.
I felt so mean after writing that! How could you find it funny? You're meant to feel sorry!!
I don't mean to include humor in my fic. I'm not even good at humor. But thank you. Glad that you found it funny :D
Y-You liked the EunHae bit? Really? I was blushing when I wrote it :s
I like OnTae as bff but that's all. I don't like them a s a couple.
It's all right hun. Keep commenting! <3 <3 <3
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