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[black_rainbow87]

This is a poem that i wrote the other day in my writing class. If you have any thoughts as to what you think it is about tell me, i would like to know what you think about it.

I'm sitting there
So far up and looking down
My spirit is free

I'm in a new world
It only exists for my escape
My spirit is free

When I am here
I am alone but i feel safe
My spirit

Comments

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[captain_stubs]

i really like that...its great.
i wish i could feel like that...

MY PERSPECTIVE ON THE POEM: I'm the one looking up!

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[black_rainbow87]

aww.. vicki you can climb with me if you want to.

:)

[xxalleyxcatxx]

I am a leaf.
Bwahhhhh.