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kapike April 22 2014, 03:41:10 UTC
This was AMAZING! And although I feel like such a pervert for liking this a lot..I like it a lot! I just loooooove incest/brother fics like this. I think they are soooo hot!. Ahem. I really like how after Junho realises that he hurt his brother since he hit him in his rage. He becomes gentle and gets close to Junsu calling him with a pet name, and kissing him on the corner of his mouth. Junsu realizing that when he exhales his twin inhales and it makes him shiver. I really liked that. Also, Junsu telling Junho that it still hurts and to kiss it better. I like how you had them grow in age throught this small story. Junsu knowing that he is now 14 and it is harder to exlain away all the kisses he wants from his brother. I love how he curls up beside Junho in bed when he sneaks away to his room. I felt the same sadisfaction as Junsu when his twin came out of nowhere and beat the bullies asses! It was cute to watch them talk with one another in their own language. Junsu telling Junho to hit the last bully standing. I love, love protective older brother who can't say no and is also very care with his younger brother. And the younger brother always getting what he wants since the older can't say no to him. I love when the nurse is fixing Junsu up and he is snuggled in his brother's lap. Also, the ending with his kiss it better question. Oh wow. This was amazing and I really enjoyed it. I really enjoyed it! <3 <3 <3

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black_prophet May 26 2014, 01:26:23 UTC
I'm glad to hear someone read this? liked this. I had fun with these little drabbles... They just sort of bordered in twincest, but the relationship between the twins just as siblings was fascinating and fun. Had fun with their language too.
Angry boys being soft and cuddly around their crush is my weakness, and it is no secret. u.u <3

Thanks so much for reading lovely.

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