Just Another Word (Part 2)

[black_k_kat]

Rating: PG-13 (will eventually be NC-17)

Word count: ~ 2,300 (this part)

Warnings: None save for copious amounts of angst and a slight emotional breakdown.

Disclaimer: All recognizable characters are the property of their respective owners. I am in no way associated with the creators, and no copyright infringement is intended.

A/N: Any updates will

Comments

[sandysan2013]

I love the way you are slowly revealing the true nature of ianto's relationship w/Mainframe and his evolving relationship w/Jack. I hope we see more of Ianto's interaction w/the rest of the team and his family. I'd like to know how the changes made to his brain affect his interactions with other people and how different he might be now than before. Rhiannon will know those details. In any case, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

[angelsphonebox]

This is getting better and better. Mainframe is completely facinating & I can't wait to find out more about her and her relationship with Ianto. Cyberwoman is such an interesting episode, mainly because there are so many directions that one episode could have gone in. I really love your take on this, that Ianto would be forced to confront the fact that he cannot save Lisa, no matter what he does, with absolute logical proof. I really admire the way you've handled the internal emotions Ianto is feeling. It's very realistic as to how someone feels at the death of a loved one, that there is overwhelming grief but also the release you feel when someone you love is no longer in pain. Beautiful job!

[lone_star_woman]

This story continues to be engaging and fascinating. I like the analogy of the Mainframe being a mother hen. She really does have his best interests at heart. I also love the way she edits herself. Human interaction is hard.

Oh, boy. Poor Jack. First, he discovers the Cyberwoman. Then, the Mainframe contacts him to spill the beans. Our Captain has a lot to deal with.

[jsks]

i think i love the mainframe.

[sammydragoncat]

I love the interaction between Ianto and mainframe.