Comments | black_goose: Fic; Bleach; Renji/Ichigo

black_goose

Fic; Bleach; Renji/Ichigo

Sep 14, 2007 15:17

lilli_evans >:(

I went to school happy today simply because there was two new Bleach episodes up. THIS IS A DISEASE.

Title: Weddings
Author: black_goose
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Renji/Ichigo
Word count: 817
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: #29 Drunken Brawl

( What kind of a gay name is 'Strawberry', anyway? )

fanfic

Comments 6

vicious_lullaby September 14 2007, 16:09:57 UTC

BAHAHAHA. XD I don't even ship RenIchi, and this totally had me cackling. xD;;;; Perfect dialogue, and Rukia with the spotlight = UTTER WIN. :D

Consider my day brightened. XD

black_goose September 15 2007, 09:18:52 UTC

I think I LOL'ed my way through this. I love writing drunk guys!

Hee! YAY!

akuni September 28 2007, 21:32:11 UTC

Oh that's fun and cute! Favourite lines:
"That's because you were dressed like you were from the 60s. And then when you left everyone thought I was gay."
"That's because your type is men." Renji nodded sagely.

OMFG HAHAHHAHA!!

I can totally see the last bit, Ichigo leaning drunkenly on the bar, slurring out his last line to poor unconscious Chad. XD And I'm a sucker for Rukia pranking the guys, I really am. :D

The only part that I stumbled a bit over was the paragraph that began with the spark of attraction - it's a little bit confusing to suddenly leap into that explanation.

Keep up the fun! :D

black_goose September 29 2007, 08:11:09 UTC

^____^ Thanks!

Yeah, I wasn't too sure about that bit, but when I read it over I liked how it suddenly changed direction. But, advice for the future and all that!

antha_aryn September 29 2007, 00:45:47 UTC

LOL that was hilarious ♥

views October 5 2007, 23:06:18 UTC

LMAO :D even though I don't usually ship these two, I love this! it's hilarious!