American Idol FF: Our own drawn-out version of a meadow run [Ryan/Simon; PG-13; RPF]

Feb 27, 2009 04:21

Title: Our own drawn-out version of a meadow run
Fandom: American Idol
Pairing: Ryan/Simon RPF
Rating: PG-13
Length: 1,200 words
Disclaimer: Ryan and Simon belong to themselves, American Idol belongs to Fox
Spoilers: Theoretically set during this season's semifinals.
Summary: It always takes them a little while to get back into the swing of things ( Read more... )

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lilith20godrich February 27 2009, 19:52:56 UTC
It's brilliant - very good written, subtle, but full of emotions. I really liked it.

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black_eyedgirl March 3 2009, 22:54:09 UTC
:) Thank you - I was worried that in going for subtlety, I missed sexiness or characterisation, so I'm glad it worked okay!

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strawberrytatoo February 27 2009, 19:59:50 UTC
Ohh, I really liked this, their banter was great, and very sexy.

The image of Simon looming over him like that, and lifting Ryan´s shirt off him...mmmmmm!

Yay, Rymon!! :D

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black_eyedgirl March 3 2009, 22:59:17 UTC
*g* I was trying really hard not to make Ryan completely passive reactive, but there's definitely something about looming!Simon...

And thank you!

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jpjw202 February 28 2009, 05:13:16 UTC
love! This made my early early saturday morning!

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black_eyedgirl March 3 2009, 23:00:20 UTC
Aw, thank you, I'm really glad you liked it :)

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ignazwisdom February 28 2009, 06:22:12 UTC
This, right here, is pretty much exactly what I've always wanted in Ryan/Simon. Your take on these two--Ryan in particular--is, IMO, dead-on. Dead perfect. Please, please tell me you'll be writing more of these guys.

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black_eyedgirl March 3 2009, 23:04:12 UTC
*glows* Well, I fell hard for the pairing, and there wasn't enough fic for my satisfaction. They always say if you can't find something you want to read, you're just going to have to write it yourself! I do want to write more, but plot currently eludes me. Positive reinforcement is always nice though, so thanks for that :)

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ignazwisdom March 6 2009, 00:59:29 UTC
There is nowhere NEAR enough fic for my satisfaction!

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deb28 February 28 2009, 23:10:36 UTC
I really liked this! I liked both of their voices and the banter, which is one of my favorite things about them. And I really liked this:

“Come here,” Simon repeats. He makes up the distance between them in two of his long strides. His hands slide under the hem of Ryan’s shirt, warm with his long fingers spread.

Ryan blinks. “Okay.” He stretches his arms up when Simon gets that far, letting Simon pull the shirt off him, before tossing it across the room.

=D

I hope you're planning to write more of them!

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black_eyedgirl March 3 2009, 23:52:49 UTC
:) I am planning to write more of them, when I get an idea that doesn't melt down into endless snarky banter that goes nowhere... And thank you for commenting, I'm so glad you liked!

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