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Distress Call: The Cierros Transgression, Bonus Chapter

Apr 06, 2011 19:30

Title: The Cierros Transgression -- "Pentimento"
Summary: Sometimes a one-way street is the only way out.
Characters: Two OCs
Rating: R for language and themes (gen fic).
Warnings: This is a very alternate universe. Adult themes and adult language.
Spoilers: No.
Disclaimer: Don't own 'em. Never will.
NOTES: This is a bonus chapter for The Cierros ( Read more... )

cierros, distress call

Comments 18

knitty_woman April 7 2011, 00:42:38 UTC

Nice way to end this. Sometimes the good guys get a pass, too.... Still looking forward to the end of May, and not just because of the show.

black_cigarette April 7 2011, 04:17:26 UTC

We are not without mercy, after all. :-)

Thanks for coming along.

damigella_314 April 7 2011, 03:48:43 UTC

That's what I needed in a sleepless night. I'm so happy for Jehosa, and I now have the answer to another question (I had been wondering, you know).

black_cigarette April 7 2011, 04:02:29 UTC

*smiles*

Life is going to get a lot easier for us now that we can refer to our Trader as we've known him for, oh, almost four years now. Sid.

Jehosa Mason never did belong on Cierros, for all that he was born there. We think Sid's right. He really will like Nal Obereh.

damigella_314 April 7 2011, 16:22:38 UTC

Now I have more questions. Who's the author of Joshua's portrait? What language is Pentimento supposed to be in, and why did you choose that language?

And I do love the idea that you guys already knew Sid's name four years ago. You're amazing.

valn April 7 2011, 03:58:22 UTC

Thank you for saving a few more souls in this dead end world.
Waiting anxiously to find out what happens next!

black_cigarette April 7 2011, 04:16:12 UTC

Thanks for reading!

It makes us happy when readers get invested at all in the characters we create. They may not be the main attraction, but we do love them.

angelcat2865 April 7 2011, 07:09:53 UTC

*smiles*

maineac April 7 2011, 13:10:45 UTC

Great! We'll meet Sid again.
And have you really known him for FOUR years!? Hurray for you guys. I honor your hard work, dedication, and discipline.

black_cigarette April 7 2011, 13:51:59 UTC

Er ... it'll be four years come fall? We'd have to look up the date for when the Cierros story was originally born, but we were still writing Aftershocks IIRC. It was one of the earliest things we had, and then we had to figure out how they got there.

Mason, on the other hand, has only been with us a few months. :-)

nightdog_barks April 7 2011, 17:47:42 UTC

The first rough outline of the Cierros story was written on July 19th, 2007. The first draft of Chapter One was written the next day, July 20th. The complete draft was just two long chapters, and was pretty much a done deal by July 30th.

I had written Bad Company in March; we started posting Aftershocks in August.

:-D