Everything at Once-Chapter 20-Revelation--Brian/Justin POV-NC-17

[plumsuede]

Title: Everything at Once-Chapter 20-Revelation--Brian/Justin POV-NC-17
Disclaimer: These characters belong to Shotime/Cowlip.
Appreciation: kinneytay,vedaprophet, and triciaqaf beta'd for me this run. Much ♥ to msjudi because laughing with her is like smoking Temmett! ;-)
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Comments

[bjshipper]

Wow- that was worth the wait and then some. I love this story. I can't even point out my favorite parts to you because I loved the whole thing. I guess I can say though, that I particularly love your style of writing. A lot of people have tried to write the "Justin goes to Hollywood, here's how Brian reacts" story- but none of them can even compare to this one. It's utterly unique- and wonderful. Thank you so much for posting it:)

[plumsuede]

//that I particularly love your style of writing. A lot of people have tried to write the "Justin goes to Hollywood, here's how Brian reacts" story- but none of them can even compare to this one. It's utterly unique- and wonderful. Thank you so much for posting it:)//

You're welcome and thanks for that wonderful feedback. You have no idea how great that makes me feel. xoxoxoxo

[plumsuede]

//That was amazing. Torture.

Amazing torture.

An apt description of this stopping, and of having to wait for more! ;) Beautiful, plum. Totally beautiful.//

You make a good point. I had no idea of the double meaning when I wrote those lines. Thank you so much for your help on this. It was wonderful.

[sandstorm63]

Omymymymymymy....this was (to me) probably the best chapter. Especially the beginning and Brian's dream. Extremely vivid. God I am in tears. And of course the hotness but it was overwhelmed by the fact that Justin is leaving. Great job Plumsie!

re: Chap 20--Revelation

[plumsuede]

//Omymymymymymy....this was (to me) probably the best chapter. Especially the beginning and Brian's dream. Extremely vivid. God I am in tears. And of course the hotness but it was overwhelmed by the fact that Justin is leaving. Great job Plumsie!//

Whoa. Thanks. The dream was challenging and fun to write at the same time. I'm glad you enjoyed it. xoxoxooxoxox

[lojotomy]

Most excellent Plummy!!!

Psychic little fucker

LOVES!!!!!!!!!!!!

[plumsuede]

thank you lojo! He is a psychic little fucker.

[teary_eyed2]

You've ....left...me ... breathless... black... 'n ...blue from such exquisite torment (I'm an oxymoron I know). The beginning was simply beautiful; every metaphor ambrosia. You take us up to heaven and then you bring us crashing back to earth with that sudden mind-churning but brilliant dream sequence. I think I've seen a few attempts to articulate Justin's nightmares by others because of the bashing but virtually nothing describing Brian's (conscious thought is very different). Of course I expected nothing less than this from you, since you relate such vivid ones from your own perspective ;)

You manage to squeeze my heart so much, so wonderfully (and you know what a hard ♥ I have).

re: Chap 20--Revelation

[plumsuede]

//You've ....left...me ... breathless... black... 'n ...blue from such exquisite torment (I'm an oxymoron I know). The beginning was simply beautiful; every metaphor ambrosia. You take us up to heaven and then you bring us crashing back to earth with that sudden mind-churning but brilliant dream sequence. I think I've seen a few attempts to articulate Justin's nightmares by others because of the bashing but virtually nothing describing Brian's (conscious thought is very different). Of course I expected nothing less than this from you, since you relate such vivid ones from your own perspective ;)

You manage to squeeze my heart so much, so wonderfully (and you know what a hard ♥ I have).//

Your icon is delish, btw! That feedback means a lot to me. I can't tell you how good it feels to know that someone is riding that very same wave with me because lord knows I ride the fuck out of it! xoxoxoxoxo