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Everything at Once-Chapter 7-Countdown-Brian’s POV

Nov 06, 2004 02:13

Here is the next installment of Everything at Once. Note--I have gone back and named the chapters for my own sanity and because this story has gotten much longer than I predicted.
Title: Everything at Once-Chapter 7-Countdown-Brian’s POV
Warnings: NC-17
Feedback: Truly appreciated. I really enjoy and care about knowing who's still reading my ( Read more... )

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plumsuede November 6 2004, 11:47:31 UTC

Heee...reversal of 202...so Brian and Jennifer are even:P
OMG, you are so right. They so are. I love the relationship between the 2 of them.

OK, Brian has to say it with a string of words. But that's a close match, right?
I think he would when he didn't plan to say it, but he needed to get his point across. He's not always the "ad man" with the perfect message.

Ah - Killing with kindness. Forgot it, Brian?
There are so many things he's not good at once he gets out of the office and his bed.... I think that's why I love him so.

paddies November 6 2004, 05:54:24 UTC

I adore this story like WHOA!!!

And shmoopy!Brian is sooooo.... ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

*loves*

plumsuede November 6 2004, 11:48:28 UTC

thank you. thank you! thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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plumsuede November 6 2004, 11:50:12 UTC

I was asleep when I posted it!!!!!!

you've managed to make him sweet, and even say "I love you", but always in character. That's commendable.

Thank you for that compliment. That made my morning, er, afternoon.

aurora_84 November 6 2004, 09:01:39 UTC

another great chapter. i'm still enjoying this story. A LOT.

can't wait to see what brian has in store for justin...so write more soon ;)

thanx

xxx

plumsuede November 6 2004, 11:51:16 UTC

thank you! I'm so glad you are still reading!!!! More is in store.

loud99 November 6 2004, 09:08:03 UTC

“You know, you shouldn’t be such a twat when I’m showing you how much I love you.”

I love shmoopy Brian, and this chapter was full of him.

And the whole Jen/Tripper...oh god funny stuff. I can totally picture Brian holding that pack of Trojans.

plumsuede November 6 2004, 11:52:41 UTC

And the whole Jen/Tripper...oh god funny stuff. I can totally picture Brian holding that pack of Trojans.
I'm so glad you liked that part. It was so fun to write. I love self_conscious_Brian. He makes me squeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!