It's really good to read your writing again. This is so real in terms of the characters, even if Usagi and Minako feel slightly immature to me, the interaction, especially between Minako and Rei, was true. It struck me how often Rei confuses being truthful with being... bitchy? There's a way to tell the truth without being hurtful and she hasn't really discovered it yet. I adored Ami and Makoto in this, the sane people trying to keep it together. Loved Ami pouring water on Minako and Usagi, go Ami! And it is interesting how Minako regressed to being a child in her vision. For all her lamenting, she still takes refuge in being 'too young'.
I wanted to write back earlier but I was at work and I can't really access anything there. Anyway, thanks. I wanted to make this deeper, but I was really running out of time writing this... thought it seems I didn't quite make it before July 1st, nonetheless
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That was, THOUGH it seems I didn't quite make it; and Minako is acting quite a BIT childish....
Man, I'm out of it!
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