Need some fic help....
OK, I'm working on a story and I could use some technique help. Nothing to do with content, but some transitonal things and such. I tried looking on LJ for any communities like that and I can't find any. Would anyone know of a community for writer's help? Or would anyone be willing to help a gal out. :) Its a Remember WENN story, but really the story doesn't matter, since I know what I'm writing and where its going... what I need help on is how to present a few things that are necessary for the story, but seem to be pulling test readers out of the story. The content that they're grumbling about is extremely important (It's kinda the reason for the plot/story) to the story, so it can't be removed... BUT I would love to be able to find a way to write said content so its not as jarring and that it flows well with the rest of the story.
If anyone knows a community or such I would more than greatly appreciate it. :)
If anyone knows a community or such I would more than greatly appreciate it. :)