muahaha.

Jan 09, 2004 21:18

Les mots danse ( Read more... )

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ilovefishhair January 10 2004, 05:31:05 UTC
I like the second part too.

Question. Do you ever update your other poetry journal anymore?

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bitterrhapsody January 10 2004, 06:44:38 UTC
no. i acutally, well, forgot about that. it was terrible stuff, anyway. ::shrug:: i tend to keep my poems to myself these days, i dont see the need to shove them down other's throats any more.

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ilovefishhair January 10 2004, 09:16:14 UTC
I always enjoyed reading them though...
I actually knew that you didn't post on there anymore. I bookmarked and check every once in a while. I was more wondering why. I guess now I know.

I really loved your poetry though, you were by no means shoving it down other's throats.

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allyscully January 10 2004, 05:39:15 UTC
Let me demonstrate how much of this I (think) I understand (yay for utilizing those latin/spanish similarities, kids!)

The words dance
over the [livre] (page?),
My heart knows that
It doesn't live
[Allez-y!] I said to [lui-]
But, I am alone
For [aujourd-hui.]

This night I know
There is not
A single person
Who knows me.
But, in the end,
History is false
[les reves etait
comme le d'eau.]

"Yes, I know it's cliched, but it's in french! I prefer the second part."

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