The White Lady: Alice In Wonderland Fic

[bitterfic]

Author: Bitterfig

Comments

[bradygirl_12]

This story has so much in it! I love it!

Alice does have a point about making her way in the world, but of course trading opium is not a good thing. Happily she came to see that, with her White Queen's help. :)

[bitterfic]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it.

[yuri_shoujo]

Niiice. It was hard to completely swallow the end knowing that Alice's heroic ending came in part due to imperialistic intentions. You did an awesome job bringing out Alice's dark side, how her boldness/muchness could go wrong.

.... unicorn horn. Bwahahahhahah. XD <3

[bitterfic]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. The end where Alice went off to conquer China really didn't sit right with me. I had to write this story to sort of reconcile myself to it.

I actually wrote a fic about that unicorn horn, it's here if you're interested--
http://bitterfic.livejournal.com/161170.html

[yuri_shoujo]

Ohh, I missed that one. Goodie, I must go read it (:

[sakru909]

Lovely fic! The ending of the movie didn't quite sit well with me. This fic helps cleanse the palette of that ending on the other hand. I'm glad Alice decided to give up trading opium in the end. ^__^

[bitterfic]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked the story.

[cantbeatthat]

I liked it!You did a good job on finding Alices voice and not making her stereotypically a Mary Sue or goody goody.Thats not always easy and so much could have gone wrong with this but it came out flawless XD

[bitterfic]

Thank you so much.

[wolfdragongod]

wow great story, very different then anything else i have read so far.

[bitterfic]

Thank you so much, I'm really pleased to know you liked it.