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[victimofmywoes]

 Title: Stitches
Summary: AU. "Where do you want me?" Shisui asked innocently.The air became heavy as the question hung through the silence. Uchiha Itachi's heart leaped towards his throat at the hidden meaning of the words.

Rating: M (just to keep it on the safe side)

Warnings: Next to none. There is just a lot of formality which you will find

Comments

[morena238]

Welcome to LJ and the bitter_nakano community! I'm glad you found your way here!!!

Now, to your fic (unfortunately I don't have much time so it's just a rushed review, but it's a review nontheless).

I really really liked the archaic language you used. It was fitting for this fic and the plot, I think. And I just fancy archaic language, although I had to look up quite a few words just to make sure they meant what I thought they meant ;)

And ohhh, the first line xD I really thought about something else there (no wonder, with the rating being M and all)

[victimofmywoes]

I'm SO glad you liked it. I had a friend do all the archaic dialogue since he is really a pro at the "old school" English.

And in the end I was really glad it came off the way it should!

And yeah, thanks for all the help you rendered! My post still has two links both leading to the same thing. :O

[emanga]

Welcome to the community! Always happy to add another fabulous writer to our ranks! :D

And this is fabulous. Oh yes. The language is so archaic and really atmospheric. I love how you have them speak in such an old way but still keep them totally in character.

Really well written. I enjoyed it! ^^

[victimofmywoes]

Thank you! It feels wonderful to be here in the first place (considering how I've always wanted to write something and contribute to this wonderful community)!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. You made my day! XD

[kaiseilin]

Welcome! ♥

This is fabulous, I adored the language and the interaction, the atmosphere was really easy to grasp and just the mood of it was wonderful :}

[victimofmywoes]

Oh, thank you so much. I'm really glad I was able to succeed in my quest of making this worth it!

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! XD

[notebook_chan]

Welcome to Bitter Nakano!

Wow, the language was fantastic; I loved the whole unique feel to your fic.

Shisui used some really sophistocated words! XD

a;lskhdfahsd The first line confused me!! Awesomeness!!

I enjoyed this alot. Really cute, and it was nice to see Shisui act a little more grown up than the usual Naruto-like behavior we usually see in him. All around very good!

[victimofmywoes]

I am SO glad you liked it!
The idea literally swam into my head. Initially it would be in the modern world, then I thought i would lack the finesse it deserves so I changed the backdrop to historic.

And yes, I desperately wanted to write a stylish and sophisticated Shisui! XD

Thanks! You made my day! XD