Comments | bitter_cakes: anthology

bitter_cakes

anthology

Sep 29, 2010 21:56

anthology
→ jonghyun x kibum; pg-15; 6133 words.
warning: crude words, character death and rape.

( Jinki wakes up the next morning, Kibum’s no where to be seen. He searches frantically around the house, he sees nothing. His phone rings immediately, “Minho? I have got no time to talk. I’m looking for Kibum and this is really urgent. That boy is out there somewhere, he’s going to break down soon if I don’t find him” )

pairing: jonghyun/kibum, fandom: shinee, !fanfic, rating: pg-15

Comments 42

deseived September 29 2010, 14:22:26 UTC

Wow, this is really, really long.
I've got a feeling this is going to be really nice!
I am so going to read it right now. :D

deseived September 29 2010, 14:38:49 UTC

Oh my gosh.
I can't believe Jonghyun died to save Key.
Please write more fics. This fic is too awesome.
♥

bitter_cakes September 30 2010, 02:47:35 UTC

THANK YOUUU. i spent a week writing this, so i really hope you enjoyed it. ♥
well, there was an article about how jjong saved key from being almost hit by a motorbike. (:

xloserrx September 29 2010, 14:23:14 UTC

That was ridiculously beautiful and sad, the writing makes me happy but the story makes me want to cry. I hope to see more future stories of yours in this community.

bitter_cakes September 30 2010, 02:50:20 UTC

/HANDS YOU TISSUES
DON'T CRYYYY. DDD:

joycekeewy September 29 2010, 14:35:44 UTC

I want to read it, but just have to know smth before I do.
Character death, who is the one dying ? I like long fics, but I'm not
in a state for tears right now, so idk if I should read. Is it Jjong ?

xloserrx September 29 2010, 14:58:32 UTC

It doesn't really delve into jjong's story, it's from keys pov but yes it's jjong dying >.< it's a dark story with no lovey fluff so you shouldn't read it if you're not in the mood for sad stuff

joycekeewy September 29 2010, 16:24:03 UTC

Okeeey~ guess I won't read then. I someday didn't listen to myself and read a
sad one when I was not on the mood. Good, but ruined me two days =_= .
I'll keep it and when I'll find like 3 hyper-dupper-romance-fluffy-chaptered
fics I'll read it between them so that I'll have something to cheer me up after ^-^-
Thanks for replying :D

kaybee38 September 29 2010, 15:05:36 UTC

Wow. This is really good. So emotional

bitter_cakes September 30 2010, 02:50:58 UTC

thank youuu. ♥

eonjekkaji September 29 2010, 15:13:19 UTC

;_____________________;

i just don't even. that was so beautiful and perfect and flawless. i can't even - god, that was just amazing. you have my heart broken all over the place and just ):

here's a heart for you for this lovely piece &heart

eonjekkaji September 29 2010, 15:20:25 UTC

*&hearts

urgh fail html

eonjekkaji September 29 2010, 15:36:19 UTC

that half assed comment up thar is not worthy enough.

WAYLT. Why do this to my otp >: WHY SO ANGSTY AND SAD AND BROKEN AND GREY )))': i'll mem this and etch it into my heart because it's that good. i'll stop being an ass and replying /rolls off thread

bitter_cakes September 30 2010, 02:53:06 UTC

LOOOOL. HALF ASSED COMMENT. HAHAHAHAHAH.
but really thank you for the lovely three comments. long comments are shamelessly love.
i want to smother you with my love. ♥
HAHAHAAH. I LOVE ANGST, there you go.
i love you for loving this oneshot so much. ♥ ♥

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