Bleach: "The Girlfriend Dilemma"

Jan 10, 2008 09:25

Featuring: Ichigo/Tatsuki
Rating: R
Timeline: Pre-series
Words: 2960

No spoilers; just a little bit of almost-Valentine's-Day fic, with a soft chewy center. In other words, light porn. Written for haku, off the prompt "chocolate."

what do you do when they buy you chocolate )

!bleach, ichigo kurosaki, tatsuki arisawa, .het

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formative January 10 2008, 17:11:04 UTC
Awww. I usually don't read Karakura Town people fic but thought I'd give it a try when I saw that it was written by you. Love the ghost granny in the elevator. ^_^

Had a horrible day and this brightened up my mood considerably. Thank you~.



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libekory January 10 2008, 17:43:32 UTC
That is such a compliment. And hee, Ichigo never really talks about his ghosts anymore, I couldn't resist.

You're so welcome, I'm sorry to hear about the horrible day. :\

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madrona_8 January 10 2008, 17:33:20 UTC
I thought you did Tatsuki very well. She's almost boylike in her denial of what things "mean", yet she's ready to admit it to Ichigo the same way he's ready to admit things to her...but only her. Very nice.

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libekory January 10 2008, 17:44:31 UTC
Aww, thank you. I'm glad that came across so well, it's definitely what I was going for. ♥

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vicious_lullaby January 10 2008, 17:35:40 UTC
...squee. ♥♥♥ Ichitatsu is just fun, but you see so little of it. And you write them perfectly.

But he didn't just have a girlfriend. He had a Tatsuki. And sleepily, Ichigo rather thought that they were much better than ordinary girlfriends.
Love, love, love.

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libekory January 10 2008, 17:45:12 UTC
♥♥ WHY HELLO THERE. I was just commenting on your fic!

And thank you, purr. It was a lot of fun to write. :3

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vicious_lullaby January 10 2008, 18:37:24 UTC
HALLO HALLO. :D ♥ I saw, and I was terribly flattered, because your own writing is so amazing!

You should do more of these two! XD

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libekory January 10 2008, 18:43:36 UTC
Heee, thank you. WELL, I loved the fic! What can I say. ♥

Maaaaybe. :3 First I have to do something evil, though.

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orin January 10 2008, 18:24:38 UTC
Ichitatsu IS fun and there’s so little of it out there and less of it written this well. *_* Gorgeousness.
Loved Ichigo’s reasoning that she wasn’t girlfriend material because she was basically one of the boys. XD; That was gorgeous and so Ichigo. Loved his fumbling and his earnestness. And Tatsuki is yummy here. Loved her sense of ‘just shut up and pretend I never did that k?’ And her forcefulness. And her vulnerability. ;.;

The world needs more Ichitatsu like this. <3 :squishes: <3

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libekory January 10 2008, 18:44:45 UTC
♥♥♥ <--this merits three of them.

Thank you so much. It all came out in two sittings, and you never know what you're going to get when a fic does that, but I kind of liked the end result. Hee.

*squishes back*

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cal_reflector January 10 2008, 19:01:45 UTC
While I know that there's few stories about this couple which I'm a huge supporter of, I think this is an excellent piece of story-telling on its own merits. Your details and imagery are excellent, your Tatsuki is aggressive even in her softer side, and her inability to be honest with her feelings towards Ichigo was very convincing.

Aside from the drabble you wrote for Haku, have you written other fics for Bleach or these two? I've written three myself and they're on ff.net.

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libekory January 10 2008, 19:36:57 UTC
Why, thank you. I'm quite flattered. ♥

Alas, no. They were a lot of fun, but this was my first real fic for them. All other het I've written can be found here, though! I made the tag just now. ;)

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