Bones Fic: And Bleeding Hearts Will Lead You Home

Oct 16, 2009 23:33

Title: And Bleeding Hearts Will Lead You Home
Author: Anna (bite_or_avoid)
Pairing: Booth/Brennan
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,493
Disclaimer: I have no money. Sue away.
Spoilers: 5x05~ A Night At The Bones Museum post-ep tag

She can feel his eyes on her the entire night.

Her skin feels heated, flushed from being on the receiving end of that ( Read more... )

fic: post-ep, fic: bones

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obrien_blue October 17 2009, 03:54:11 UTC
LET THERE BE FIC, and it was so. I'm trying to get my first post-ep (first of many; we've got weeks to fill!) out, and I'm getting held up by wonders of language, such as this:

Her lips press against his softly, the calm before the storm, and he sighs like she’s just relieved him of some horrific burden.

Sometimes, there are things I read, and I think, "Dammit. I wish so much I would have written that." That line? DAMN. That line. It's just perfect.

“So, we’re agreed. You weren’t going to kiss me, and I wasn’t going to kiss you.”

“Good. I’m glad we got that settled.”

This time, his smile is a smirk. She reciprocates. The familiar has its appeal too.

I always think Booth tastes like scotch and chocolate, too. Why is that? I guess he just looks the type.

God, amazing. Great, great job. I was so excited to see that you post-ep'd, and of course, you did not disappoint!

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tempertemper October 17 2009, 06:36:06 UTC
always think Booth tastes like scotch and chocolate, too. Why is that? I guess he just looks the type.

LOL! Me too!

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wehaveacase October 17 2009, 21:59:00 UTC
LOL I always imagined he'd taste like apple pie and coffee myself :)

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bite_or_avoid October 18 2009, 04:37:07 UTC
I think it may depend on what time of day you're kissing him :P

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regularamanda October 17 2009, 04:02:32 UTC
We haven't had a new fic from you in weeks, *weeks* and I've so missed your writing :)

*happy sighs* It was wonderful :)

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bite_or_avoid October 18 2009, 04:49:57 UTC
We haven't had a new fic from you in weeks

I know *hangs head in shame*. With the episodes being so great, I just haven't been able to get a full fic out until now. I have like five partially written stories collecting dust on my hard-drive :( Hopefully, I'll get my mojo back over the hiatus. Thank you for reading!

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butterflyborn October 17 2009, 04:05:09 UTC
*is dead from the bliss*

I thought I was dead from the episode but that was obviously just fainting. This, THIS is dead from the utter bliss. The minute I saw you posted a tag for yesterday's episode I squeed all over again. *sheepish look*

For some reason I didn't see the last line coming but OMG! it totally made me shiver. Off to add this to memories, after I get reincarnated. ;-)

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bite_or_avoid October 18 2009, 04:54:08 UTC
LOL, *resuscitates you*. Whew, that was a close one ;)

So glad you enjoyed this!

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cardiogod October 17 2009, 04:10:14 UTC
THIS is what I wanted to write, but couldn't.

Brava.

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tempertemper October 17 2009, 06:35:11 UTC
Ha! Me too *g*

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bite_or_avoid October 18 2009, 04:56:36 UTC
I don't know about that. What you wrote was majorly awesome, but thank you for the lovely compliment :-)

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bite_or_avoid October 18 2009, 05:18:58 UTC
On the show, I often feel like less is more with them, and that's how I tried to build this fic. Just upping the tension, a bit at a time. I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you so much for the lovely comments! :D

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