How's My Driving?
IP logging is most definitely off and all comments will be screened. Go wild. I can handle it. I probably give myself rougher critique.
I have a problem with dialogue, so any help would be appreciated. Am I missing any key speech patterns? Am I adding any that shouldn't be there? Just tell me, and I'll fix it.
Also, hi, I should say this. Don't expect tags at a set time from me. I'm a profound insomniac and sometimes I try killing time with random tags. Don't be surprised if you see one at four am. Oh, and contact me on this entry if you want to tell me you hate backtags!
If you feel like berating me outside of lj, you can do that too!
AIM: shadowsshadowsha
MSN: Lolliscythe@hotmail.com
Email: Lolliscythe@hotmail.com
Plurk: Lolliscythe
I have a problem with dialogue, so any help would be appreciated. Am I missing any key speech patterns? Am I adding any that shouldn't be there? Just tell me, and I'll fix it.
Also, hi, I should say this. Don't expect tags at a set time from me. I'm a profound insomniac and sometimes I try killing time with random tags. Don't be surprised if you see one at four am. Oh, and contact me on this entry if you want to tell me you hate backtags!
If you feel like berating me outside of lj, you can do that too!
AIM: shadowsshadowsha
MSN: Lolliscythe@hotmail.com
Email: Lolliscythe@hotmail.com
Plurk: Lolliscythe