Sestina!fic #3: "Breaking the Cycle"

[bironic]

Others:
- Sestina #1: House post-infarction
- Sestina #2: "A Typical Day in Diagnostics"

Title: Breaking the Cycle
Character: James Wilson
Rating: R
Word Count: 400
Prompts: whispers (from daasgrrl), pound (from thewlisian_afer), part, wife, friend, lies
A/N: With thanks to synn for looking over draft after draft and saying each was fine, even if I didn't believe her

Comments

[thewlisian_afer]

I have no concrit for you. I love this, as is. ♥

[bironic]

I will take hearts in place of concrit with no complaint. :) (And that would be a heart instead of a smiley if I knew how to make one.) Thank you; I hope you will like the upcoming one that uses all 6 prompts from what you supplied.

[thewlisian_afer]

haha! I have to teach you how to make hearts. It's & hearts ; without the spaces.

I don't think I actually commented on the first two sestinas, but I loved both of them too, so I'm sure I'll like the one that uses my prompts. :D

[bironic]

Cool -- glad to hear you liked the others. I do think you'll like "yours." It's only half-done, though, so it's kind of hard to say for sure.

(Oh, it's plural! No wonder. I left off the "s" last time and, not surprisingly, got the code thrown right back at me.)

[secondsilk]

The & hearts ; is the html code for the playing card suit. Also & spades ; & diams ; & clubs ;

&spades ♣ ♦ ♥

Although, it seems you don't need the semicolon.