Comments | bironic: Fic! "A Helping Hand," House/Wilson, NC-17 (1/2)

bironic

Fic! "A Helping Hand," House/Wilson, NC-17 (1/2)

Aug 13, 2006 09:22

Title: A Helping Hand
Fandom: House M.D.
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 8,670
Summary: Wilson has an unusually rough day and House decides (somewhat despite himself) to help. Things go further than he planned.
Disclaimer: Not mine in any way, alas.
A/N: Takes place between "Forever" and "No Reason." Spoilers through "Forever ( Read more... )

my writing, house: misc

Comments 15

Fic: A Helping Hand part one rosewillread August 13 2006, 14:31:29 UTC

Wow.
Thank you.
I almost couldn't read past Wilson's description of the kid. It seemed too conveniently parallel to me. And while that is not actually a problem, the idea of an awkward revelation at that moment made me very uncomfortable.
But you didn't (and I assumed you wouldn't) do that. The awkwardness, and the moments of not-awkward-ness in the aftermath went back and forth very well.
And the piece of confirmation of Wilson's desire for House was just right.

On to part two! :-)

Re: Fic: A Helping Hand part one bironic August 14 2006, 23:34:36 UTC

Too conveniently parallel as in perhaps one of his traits ought to be taken out of the list because it was distracting? I imagine that Lukas is -- was -- very different from House and that Wilson picked out or noticed the characteristics that they had in common. For instance, the kid could be blond and sweet, but Wilson would mention the blue eyes and amputated leg. (The knee is the most common site for osteosarcoma to affect, according to the research I did, so that part wasn't much of a stretch.)

And, awkward revelation as in Wilson possibly having an inappropriate relationship with the kid? Inquiring minds, etc.

Re: Fic: A Helping Hand part one secondsilk August 15 2006, 01:11:44 UTC

I think the list works fine, and it certainly makes sense that Wilson would be listing the qualities that remind him of House, first of all because the kid does remind him of House, and also because that's what House is going to pay attention too ( ... )

Re: Fic: A Helping Hand part one bironic August 15 2006, 01:19:56 UTC

Ha. That sort of exchange is definitely not limited to West Wing fic, as I'm sure you know. Hell, it probably crops up in every fandom. But I get what you mean now, and I know that fear, and I'm glad not to have disappointed by going down that road.

bitter_crimson August 13 2006, 14:51:50 UTC

*makes a strangled happy noise*

Oh, oh. On to part two.

nakannalee August 14 2006, 01:12:56 UTC

Wow. Wow wow wow. (Wish I could formulate SOMETHING here, but...wow.)

You're writing is amazing. You have the voices down perfectly--there were so many great lines in here. The details you put in the narrative really add to the story, too. I love the scene where Wilson's eating his salad and House is practically interrogating him.

On to part two...

bironic August 15 2006, 00:03:21 UTC

Thank you. Details really do make all the difference, don't they?

Poor Wilson, never allowed to eat his lunch in peace. :)

captain_tulip August 14 2006, 05:22:05 UTC

*is completely incoherent*

I - you! This! Just - can't talk. Oh. Guh. Will - next. When finished - PART TWO! Clicky. Because - perfection. In every way. You - God.

*worships*

bironic August 14 2006, 17:52:50 UTC

You crack me up. Just wanted to say. I'll write back properly to your other comment.

krippity August 14 2006, 05:49:51 UTC

"Yep. Happy plug-pulling,"

lol. funny as, hot as and gave me that funny feeling in my throat which is a good happy sign.

on to part two