Comments | bironic: New (/old) SGA fic! In which John and Ronon dance offworld, and Teyla sings.

bironic

New (/old) SGA fic! In which John and Ronon dance offworld, and Teyla sings.

Feb 12, 2012 18:43

Still thinking of a title, but whatever, three years later it is done!

Title: Songs they have sung for a thousand years
Fandom: SGA
Characters: John, Ronon, Teyla, Rodney, OCs
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,100
Summary: Kopha-na and kopha-da: supporter and supported. The team joins an offworld performance one evening.
Contains: Nothing objectionable, I ( Read more... )

my writing

Comments 10

deelaundry February 12 2012, 23:50:44 UTC

First, woo hoo for completion! Second, I love it. ♥

bironic February 13 2012, 01:08:38 UTC

\o/ Yay, thank you. Now if I could just come up with a title. I couldn't do it in the last three years, yet here I am hoping one will come to me in a few hours. Never mind, got one!

deelaundry February 13 2012, 01:34:31 UTC

It's a great title!

bironic February 14 2012, 00:53:05 UTC

kassrachel February 13 2012, 00:33:22 UTC

Oh oh oh! Oh, this is so lovely. I love the descriptions. You've made it all come alive. And a physics dance -- hee! ♥

bironic February 13 2012, 01:13:21 UTC

I would like to see Rodney's team do a choreographed dance. :) I bet Zelenka does a mean robot. Ha. No, actually I bet he'd be a bit flaily, but he likes slow dancing better anyway, even if he sometimes steps on the lady's feet.

But this is not about Zelenka, this is about your lovely comment - thank you! I really wanted to finish the scene and am glad it finally happened. One night in the mountains, with team and music.

p.s. Have just found a title, thanks to that last joke (Sound of Music lyrics) - thanks by association! :)

mific February 13 2012, 06:59:04 UTC

I love the vivid way you've described the dancing and singing, and even though Rodney doesn't directly participate he's still part of it and caught up in it all. Very nice indeed - and any imagery of John being bendy rocks my boat, not to mention Ronon doing high kicks!

bironic February 14 2012, 00:52:57 UTC

Thanks! I'd say "I totally agree" about the last part re: John and Ronon, but that may be obvious based on the fact that I wrote it. :)

michelel72 February 18 2012, 04:14:10 UTC

Oh, wow, this is quite lovely.

esteefee February 25 2012, 00:24:13 UTC

awww, well done. I especially loved Ronon's knife-throw. :D

(I'm Greek and I know only too well how the men love to show off endlessly, so I'm very glad you gave Teyla a role to play. :)))