Comments | bironic: Mary Sue noncon #5 or 6

bironic

Mary Sue noncon #5 or 6 - first-time scene

Mar 20, 2011 22:33

So, I just finished this? It's the first-time scene for Karin (OFC) and Makor (OMC) in the main thread of my DS9 Mary Sue noncon epic. 4,600 words, warning for graphic noncon, some struggling, some bondage, some humiliation, and a little melodrama. With bonus unexpected muscle cramp metaphor ( Read more... )

my writing, mary suuuuue, i can't believe i'm posting this

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nightdog_barks March 21 2011, 03:14:54 UTC

I must be one of the three.

:-)

blackmare March 21 2011, 03:19:43 UTC

... second of three, over here.

nightdog_barks March 21 2011, 03:25:55 UTC

... MARE?

I am LOL'ing for real. :-D

blackmare March 21 2011, 03:45:16 UTC

It was worth delurking just to shock you.

I don't go looking for these kinds of stories and I basically never read them when I stumble across them, but. It's Bironic and I can't ... I have a weakness.

Weakness dates back to approx. age 5 so it predates my even knowing wth sex was, go figure, etc. etc.

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l_eremita March 21 2011, 04:58:50 UTC

Poor Karin. I like her spirit though -- she always stands up to the bad guys, no matter what.

bironic March 21 2011, 11:28:28 UTC

...Remind me to warn you when I get around to writing/posting the part where that stops being true. :)

♥

kassrachel March 21 2011, 12:47:40 UTC

Nnnrgh.

Disturbing, and shouldn't be as hot as it is, and yet, it is.

*g*

bironic March 21 2011, 22:45:04 UTC

Oh, hi! Okay, so I underestimated numbers. There may be six of you. :) And yeah, there's an ongoing internal battle over whether it's wrong to like stuff like this, so there's great comfort in exploring just with OCs and not sharing widely.

kassrachel March 21 2011, 23:12:25 UTC

If there's one thing I've learned from fandom, it's that it's good to embrace my id. I have a lot less shame now about the things I think are hot, because it turns out that -- against all odds! -- there are all of these other smart interesting women who apparently think so too. :-)

bironic March 21 2011, 23:14:37 UTC

And isn't that just the crux of it?

rubynye March 21 2011, 23:03:58 UTC

Oh, Karin. Oh, my God. She suffers so beautifully. I feel terrible, wiping my eyes even as I voraciously devour tales of her pain and humiliation, but she's just so wonderfully human, pushed to the brink and beyond.

I am so going to reread this when I need to cry. This is gorgeously crafted agony.

bironic March 24 2011, 23:02:07 UTC

♥

I'm sorry, and I'm shamefully gratified.

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bironic March 24 2011, 23:00:57 UTC

LURKERS, ALL.

Heh. No, it's awesome that a handful of people are reading these. Including you. & thanks. <3