Comments | bironic: Flashficlet: "One night in Princeton," Remy Hadley/Radek Zelenka, adult

bironic

Flashficlet: "One night in Princeton," Remy Hadley/Radek Zelenka, adult

Jan 28, 2010 07:43

Title: One Night in Princeton
Fandom: House/SGA
Pairing: Remy Hadley/Radek Zelenka
Rating: Adult
Word Count: 825
Spoilers: House 6.3 ("Epic Fail"); SGA series finale
A/N: A quick Porn Battle IX fic, prompt "unexpected." Read it there or below.

( She is a good head taller, and far more pleasing to the eye than he with his scruffy hair and growing potbelly, but then he is accustomed to being with women who outshine him. )

my writing

Comments 21

kassrachel January 28 2010, 13:43:10 UTC

She is a doctor; he could have guessed she would be a master of anatomy.

Ahahaha. I love your Zelenka voice here, and this is gorgeous!

bironic January 28 2010, 22:53:59 UTC

Thanks so much!

pwcorgigirl January 28 2010, 14:36:36 UTC

Rodney never learned the art of flirtation ... Oh, so true, and Radek's voice is wonderful. I love that quiet confidence and intelligent observation.

bironic January 28 2010, 22:53:38 UTC

Thank you! It's hard to weigh so many things when you're just trying to get a ficlet out, and a PWP at that -- questions like whether Radek would sound like he sounds on the show if we're hearing his thoughts rather than hearing him speak English didn't get their due consideration -- but I do like how it turned out, and I'm very glad you read & enjoyed.

roga January 28 2010, 17:13:45 UTC

Whoa, unexpected does not even begin to cover this pairing! But this was awesome and your Zelenka voice is great, and I love the small allusions to both Rodney and Foreman.

bironic January 28 2010, 22:52:14 UTC

Hee. I don't know where in my brain that pairing came from, but I'm glad it fruited into a story. (I don't know why I just used "fruited," either, but I kind of like it.) I was going for a Radek/Elizabeth reference there, too, in describing Radek's type. :)

In sum: Yay, you liked!

secondsilk January 28 2010, 18:02:22 UTC

Radek! Remy!
This is my new most favourite pairing. I love the simplicity of it. Take the opportunity.

bironic January 28 2010, 22:50:59 UTC

Two great tastes that taste great together, eh? Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed.

chocolate_frapp January 28 2010, 18:34:03 UTC

this was hot and I normally don't even like 13. nicely done. ;)

bironic January 28 2010, 22:50:31 UTC

I'm glad you thought so. Thanks for commenting!